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The Devil’s Holiday Special

This is a little Christmas-themed one-shot about my Sith Inquisitor, Murlesson, who I previously wrote about in my massive Inquisitor-story-rewrite, Devil’s Due. This event was hinted at in the original epilogue of Devil’s Due; I ended up not keeping that epilogue, but the material in it I’m going to recycle later, as Murlesson/Aristheron/Akuliina fans may be interested to know that I’ve begun writing a sequel to DD called The Devil You Know. I will probably not publish anything for a long time as my writing process can be very time consuming (I started writing this holiday fic last April), I still haven’t played the game past Ilum, my ambitions for the story arcs are high, and my workload is as bad as ever, but hey some bits of the start of a draft exist (and even some snippets for a third fic to follow that!).

An important change: you may recall I had established Pyron’s family previously on Ziost. This was a mistake. I knew Ziost was important to the Empire, but I didn’t know it was the ice version of Korriban until I started writing this fic (back in last April, actually). : P And now that I’m determined to put them in a super normal North American-style suburb, that really doesn’t fit! How can you have a lovely cheesy special white Christmas Life Day if the entire planet is always cold? (suburbs are the city version of cancer but many people grew up with them, so I thought it would be neat to use them here.) But seriously, does the Empire have any nice planets?? (Besides Commenor and Kuat, apparently? Which in my stories I developed, not BioWare : P )

I keep putting Sith Lords in domestic situations because it’s funny. Hands up if you want a full-on coffeeshop AU where everyone’s still Sith? (Or a sequel to Something to Prove : P) (I’m kidding I don’t have time to write either of those)

 

A Sith Lord’s First Life Day

Darth Nox got out of the taxi cab and looked around at the houses surrounding him with an amount of trepidation that surprised even himself. For someone who was used to cities filled with skyscrapers, looming, impersonal, and seething with activity, he would have thought himself easily equal to this very simple environment. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 38: Perchance to Scheme

Okay now we’re done. EDIT: I rewrote everything for a third time, for reasons explained after the chapter.

Thank you again to Tharash/Aristheron, who allowed me to use his character and mangle his story into something entirely new, who beta-read from Chapter 31 to 33, and helped shape the rest of the story arc strategically, and gave me advice through all these years of writing. He made it exponentially better from my first drafts and inspired me a lot. Without him this final, most original arc would have fallen flat.

Part 37: Ascension

 

Part 38: Perchance to Scheme

It had been six months. Six long months since his Ascension, and yet they had flown by in a tearing hurry. He didn’t want to talk about all the times he’d nearly died again some more, but he was still very much alive, to the disappointment of many people. Some of those people he had eliminated himself, or arranged for their demise, both to get back at them and to make life easier. And every day that he lived, he grew stronger.

Aristheron was still there, and Akuliina, and he found himself working closely with both of them, especially Akuliina. It was… fun. The Empire had had far too many crises in such a short time, crises that the three young Sith had been called on to quell together – to be sure, any nation went through periods of great turmoil periodically, any cursory glance at the past would show that. It was just very good luck for him that he happened to be in power during such a time.

He swivelled his chair so he could look out of the window of his grand office high in the Sith Sanctum, putting his feet up on the right wing of his desk. His hands were steepled across his chest as he contemplated both the never-ending thunderstorm of Kaas City and his next moves. He really didn’t like Darth Aruk over in the Ministry of Philosphy, and the feeling was mutual. But it wasn’t time to pull him down yet. Far better to infiltrate the other Ministries, the other Spheres, and plant resources to prepare for his ultimate goal.

I mean, who really expects the librarian to be the terrorist? he asked himself, inwardly amused at both the over-simplification of his duties and the way they hid his true nature. He rather thought he’d been doing well at proving himself to the Empire, setting himself up as ‘helpful, but not to be crossed’, pretending his only agenda was to learn his place as quickly as possible lest the others kill him for incompetence. Which was a little bit true, but any subservience they detected from him was an act; he’d submit to no one ever again. When he got better at his job, he’d switch his open hidden agenda to bickering with Aruk. Let them think that such a petty rivalry was all the danger he could muster towards them.

His messages inbox beeped in the tone that indicated it was a message from his cult. He almost tuned it out, but after a minute more, turned back to his desk and checked it.

It was a forwarded message… from Ashara.

Hey! What’s up? It’s been a while! I’ve heard you’re keeping busy with Aristheron while I’m away. I hope you’re not being mean to too many people. I miss you, do you wanna hang out and catch up? Maybe on Commenor again? Let me know the next time you’re out that way and I’ll get the Rurouni to stop by! We’ll actually be in the area in a few days, but I know it’s short notice and I don’t know where you’re at and you’re probably stupid busy as usual. But I wanted to take the opportunity to say hi anyway, since it’s been a while. Hope you’re doing well!

Love, Ashara

He flattened his hands against the desk, trying to contain the uncontainable – the spark of Light within him welling up in unexpected joy, cutting through all his dark schemes with a pure happiness and delight that only she could bring out in him, even now. He missed her terribly, and… she didn’t hate him.

Rylee: return message. “I’ll be there in three days.” He sent the message and stood, touching his comm. “Revel. Warm up the Viper. I’m leaving Dromund Kaas.”

 


 

Thank you so much for reading! This story was a massive (300K words) 5-year endeavour, and in many places it went in unexpected directions. If you managed to stick through the whole thing (and I’m guessing you did if you’re here), I’d be interested in your thoughts! Even if it’s been years, I check comments regularly.

So in the previous version of this ‘epilogue’ I received a comment from someone saying it didn’t really feel like the end of the story? And that person is 100% correct, because it’s not the end of the story, but I did a bad job of making it feel like the end of the fic – I think because I still had Ashara/Murlesson soundtracks I wanted to use (Jonathan Young’s covers of Shut Up and Dance and Every Time We Touch, and Disturbed’s You’re Mine), and because I wasn’t planning to write a sequel so I wanted to let everyone know how things were going in Murlesson’s future a bit.

However. I’m now attempting to begin work on writing a sequel. And it’s going to be just as big as this one. Even though it’s annoyingly hard to be ambitiously creative when feeling on the edge of burning out all the time, and I also feel like I need to play all the content so I can fit in my OC story arcs, so it’s going to take a while because ugh I hate playing that game. So if you read the previous version of this epilogue and are wondering where all the content went, fear not! It’s going to get recycled into the new fic (tentatively called The Devil You Know). I’m also working on a Holiday Special, because it’s funny.

(more self-critique: I feel, upon months-later read-throughs, that Act 4 is a bit uneven. It certainly has stakes and tension, but it was difficult to create a through-line of plot, because I decided to have it do a lot of timeskips. I also had a lot of ideas for how to make Murlesson’s life hard, and maybe using ALL of them was overkill on the pacing. So it is what it is, but I’ll be keeping these thoughts in mind next time I write something similar. : D )

Anyway, I’ll see you in an unspecified future time frame with more Sith bois and girls! Murlesson/Aristheron/Akuliina team-up! Cheers!

Devil’s Due: Part 37: Ascension

I’m actually surprised that a few people weren’t sure which companion Murlesson was going to pick to keep and which to put in the Rakata box, I thought it was pretty obvious. ; )

Turns out this is the second-last chapter after all because I always underestimate how long social scenes are going to go. ONE MORE I PROMISE

Part 36: Darth Nox

 

Part 37: Ascension

Thanaton’s body was unmoving where it sprawled, his presence was well and truly snuffed out. The final explosion of his soul had not done much damage, only sweeping a hot, bitter wind over everyone. Murlesson let himself float to the ground and nearly staggered from weariness, as he capped his internal wellspring, pulling his aura back in close – though he wasn’t as careful as usual, what was the point? The whirlwind of rubble collapsed unceremoniously, and the dark swirling clouds overhead dissipated like they’d never been. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 36: Darth Nox

Soundtracks for this chapter: Scene one gets a blend of two of the best soundtracks from Corpse Party, The Nightmare of the School Years (which I used before but it’s still good) and Chapter 5’s Main Theme. But the final fight is upon us! I’ve used so many different tracks for this fight I have a whole playlist just for this one fight. The first one on there was The Stains of Time from MGR (for some reason I’ve always felt like that was the most edgey teenage boy song on the OST), which in a way was a callback to the very first soundtrack of this story, from the very first chapter, being I’m My Own Master Now also from MGR. Then over time the playlist also expanded to include Angel of the Dark by Aviators as a callback to when Murlesson first showed power and mysticism in public (although in this scene it actually goes at the end), and then Change the World by Man With a Mission, and finally a song which I think is called something about ParadiseLost (Belial Avatar BGM) from Granblue Fantasy (I felt “let me feel the power that could rip me to shreds” was a pretty appropriate chorus line!). I hope it lives up to the hype I’ve built!

Part 35: Paradigm

 

Part 36: Darth Nox

 

Bursting through the door down from the roof, he nearly crashed into Revel. “Had a fight with Shara, huh?”

“Shut up,” Murlesson growled, storming past him at a run. “I don’t have time. She’s in trouble.”

“So you’re going to rescue her anyway, of course,” Revel said, turning to jog after him. “She’s really got you wrapped around her finger.”

Murlesson turned, eyes raw and blazing. “Don’t you talk about either of us like that.”

“Hey, don’t worry about it,” Revel said. “I’m surprised you haven’t had more fights-“ Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 35: Paradigm

Sorry to the people who don’t like this sort of drama? (and yes I threw in a bit about my obsession with urban planning lol – in my opinion, Corellia in-game has the perfect aesthetic for Corellia, it’s just how I imagined it… but from an immersion standpoint, it doesn’t look like a place I would want to live. BioWare is really, really bad with big maps and it’s particularly bothersome to me here. There’s no draw to exploring because every bit looks the same as every other bit. (the MMO with the best, most explorable maps, imo, is probably GW2.))

 

Part 34: Accelerate

 

Part 35: Paradigm

The tunnels were dark and he’d lost all sense of direction. A full battalion of enemy soldiers led by Lord Kogni, a fraction of the attacking force but still enough to give him a bad day, had pursued him into the depths of Coronet City and were right behind him as he ran. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 34: Accelerate

Mannnnn I know it’s been so long since I had a chapter, but first I burned out on work real bad this year, and then Tharash/Aristheron came over to hang out for 3 weeks and we drove all over my province and it was really fun but I didn’t start feeling creative again until I’d recovered from that. So that’s why it’s taken so long. And unfortunately, my beta-reader is too busy right now to check everything, so I just have to hope it’s good enough like I did with the first 3/4 of this story. XD (He still helped talk me through some of the tricky plot bits though!)

Originally there was going to be another defecting Sith at the end of this chapter, just to show Thanaton losing his grip on his underlings, but that was one step too complicated for me.

Three more chapters until we’re done, let’s go! (and I’m not just saying that, they’re already mostly written, let’s really go!)

 

Part 33: Labyrinth

 

Part 34: Accelerate

Ashara met him back at the park, alone. “Are you okay? You met Thanaton, didn’t you? I sensed your feelings.” She frowned. “Still do, actually, now that I’m close to you again. What happened?” Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 33: Labyrinth

Oh my god, I had this chapter mostly finished three months ago and I got so hung up on the Selonians. I think this is my third version of the scene? I’m pretty confident about this version.

The final scene in the chapter is inspired by Run by Disturbed : D

Who knows when the next chapter will be out!

 

Part 32: Battle of Wits

 

Part 33: Labyrinth

Jeik had hacked a random speeder for him, and he drove it recklessly. He hadn’t really practised in months and it slid across the road dangerously, made worse by his twitchy overcorrecting. His breath came quick and his hearts thudded distractingly; Darkness was with him, his anger and fear taking over, but it only aided his reflexes; it didn’t tell him how to drive.

Xalek had called from his own base to report the attack really was underway, and that Lord Skar was causing a lot of damage. Even Xalek was having trouble with him. Not good. Jeik and his Mandalorians would be able to take the other base in its current state – he’d killed or crippled anyone foolish enough to attack him, and there were not many personnel left after that – but that meant he had nothing to bring to defend his own except himself. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 32: Battle of Wits

This one took a while… not only was the actual writing complicated and challenging (and I went for a round of beta-reading just to be sure it makes sense, which was the best idea), I had been working on my Halloween cosplay and playing the other four SWTOR routes that I didn’t play when I first tried the game five years ago. I’m pleasantly surprised, they were all pretty enjoyable. Warrior is still my favourite overall, but Bounty Hunter is up there with Smuggler for entertainment value. Meanwhile, I had to restart Agent three times in Act 1 though until I found a set of decisions that I was happy with. It’s just really not comfortable playing a hardcore KGB officer, you know? And it’s much more fun if you put on the Ghost in the Shell OST. Anyway, my personal tier list is probably: Consular < Trooper/Knight < Agent/Inquisitor < Bounty Hunter/Smuggler < Warrior.

That being said, I need a break from the game and its terrible awful no-fun gameplay. I do want to ask if it would be worth getting into… the entire rest of SWTOR, as I vaguely remember playing Ilum once four years ago and that’s as far as I’ve gone. And if it’s possible while still maintaining my stance of boycotting EA financially. But it’s going to be a while before I feel like slogging through more terrible boring pointless mob-infested maps, so don’t expect any sequels in the near future even if I do decide to play more. XD Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 31: How to Start a War

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH It’s been a literal year and a half since I last wrote this, so terrifying has this last story arc been. I will admit to being distracted by other things – work, GW2, DnD – but also just… how to follow up on Kel Reu Giri?? How to follow up on literally punching ghosts in the face?? So I put it off.

Then I started feeling last month like “hey, you should pick that up again” and I was like “maybe in September, after I finish my Rinala cosplay” and my feelings were like “no you should do it now” so I re-read the fic twice (once to read it, once to correct a whole bunch of embarrassing typos and adjust small scenes that I thought weak) and played the Corellia arc of the game. (And I’m working on the other four storylines that I didn’t play before. Man, Consular is boring.) Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 30: To Sleep

Time for a bit of a palate cleanser, except for the action scene, which is not a palate cleanser at all and probably needs violence warnings on it. The song lyrics he quotes halfway through are from a song I’d like to write someday, if I can actually figure out how to form a metal band and write metal songs.

The music for the action scene is this headbanger of a tune from Corpse Party! One of those songs that makes me wish I could play drums!

And more importantly, I can stop using italics to represent ghosts in Murlesson’s POV now, thank goodness, that was getting tiring.

Part 29: Don’t Forget Me

 

Part 30: To Sleep

Murlesson was completely out of it by the time they reached Ghen’s Outpost, and Andronikos, Talos, and Vany very quickly bundled him into their make-shift medical tent. He needed more medical care than was available out here in the wilderness, though, and as soon as they had looked him over and made sure he wasn’t going to croak in the next hour or so, they were back on the shuttle and headed to Voss City. There was a proper modern hospital there, one that could deal with weird things like “missing fingertips”. When Ashara was allowed into his room there, her first thought was that he looked really weird in white. He only ever wore black, edgy Sith boy that he was… and without it, he really didn’t look like himself. Though it was nice to see him all cleaned up and not stinky anymore. Continue reading