June 25, 2011

10 Character Meme

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10 Character meme

drawn June 24-25, ’11

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Click for insanity. Yeah, I kinda ran out of inspiration at the end… and one of the words is maybe not wholly PG, but some of them are not too bad. I like the one of Math defending me from EbilTam. Also the one where Flairé has to marry someone came out pretty much how I wanted it too, but the one of Flairé and Marteth camping I wish I’d been able to do better. Maybe I’ll just do it as a picture sometime.

So that’s what I’ve been doing instead of writing or anything useful.

If any of the panels aren’t clear, let me know so I can make it clear. : P

Bit of clarification anyway… Layalin isn’t joking when she says she’s going to die too – kalmaeirin elves have a heart condition that means they can literally break their hearts when they lose someone particularly dear to them. Of course, it would not be the fault of a car crash. : P

10 characters for a meme

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10 characters for a meme

drawn June 24, ’11

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Working on the hilarious 10 character meme. You can probably guess at the answers if you know it already… but they might not be what you expect! I thought some of these turned out rather well. Probably stolen from Colby, but it’s been so long I’ve forgotten. I only just got around to it. : P

Also editting Chapter 2 of the novel. Split it into two chapters, so Tam’s moment of glory is now in Chapter 3. Chapter 2 is still veeeery rough. Not happy with most of it. I may need to chop it out and rewrite it by itself a few times. Wondering how Chapter 3 will go, since I’ve never written it before. Flaer made a long internal monologue about how useless anger is… and then flips out at a dragon for being stupid. What a silly boy.

What else? Um, not much. Obsessing unhealthily over my DevArt. Added like five bazillion pictures to my favourites. Guess I should add more of my own stuff. I think I will stick to colour stuff, because the pencil stuff is not so impressive. More or less. If there’s something on Adhemlenei you think I should post on DevArt, tell me. : P

Also dug up my Tour links again in preparation for a couple weeks from now… Go Andy! And Cadel! And Ryder! Okay, I guess I can wait until it actually gets going. It’s gonna be amazing on the new TV.

September 5, 2010

Chibi chibi

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drawn Sep 5-6, ’10

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Ctrl+J is fab.

Tweaks coming tomorrow. And additions.

Can YOU name everyone here?

EDIT: Check the characters page! It is now covered in chibis. Except for the last four characters (Evylyin+Dymunde, Lyra, Lakia, and Cassandra) because I don’t consider them important enough. Comment if you disagree.

And I found a way that’s easier than Ctrl+J to make transparencies. lol.

EDIT 2: I tweaked a few of the chibis on the character page. Marteth’s head looks a little less like a football (still not ideal, though), Anne’s wing is the proper size, Jalril’s eyes are golden, and a few other colour changes. Cheers!

December 15, 2009

Adhemlenei: Sword’s Innocence: Chapter 5

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Chapter 4          Chapter 6

 

Chapter 5

 

Flairé was strolling through a dry, grey, rocky valley on his way south when he heard someone calling. He turned, and five kalmaei, dressed in leather with their hair tied back, appeared on a nearby ridge and hurried towards him.

“Sir?” they asked. “Do you have a moment?”

“What’s the matter?” Flairé asked pleasantly.

“We’re miners, searching for iron in these mountains. But we’ve found something truly bizarre: a child, and we don’t know what to make of him. Will you advise us?”

Flairé nodded, his imagination alight.

They led Flairé to a rough hut, built as a temporary shelter against any weather that wasn’t winter.

Flairé entered slowly, stooping to avoid the low door frame (built that way to keep in warmth) and saw a small boy, less than two feet in height, sitting cross-legged on the floor, clad in dirty colourless rags. The boy stared back with defiant brown eyes glittering from under a thick unkempt mop of black hair.

“Who are you?” demanded the boy gravely.

“My name is Flairé,” the elf in question answered.

“No, who are you?” repeated the boy impatiently.

“Why don’t you watch your tongue, you rogue?” one of the other elves said irritably. “This is a prince you’re talking to.”

“What the pixie gas are you talking about?” the boy rejoined, equally irritably.

The miner sighed. “A prince is a great leader in training. This man is Flairé descended of Flar and Stialia, King and Queen of the Moonland, and Lady Zela. I don’t suppose you know who they are, but you must respect him. Tell him who you are, now.”

“Make me,” the boy snapped, crossing his arms.

Flairé sat down next to the boy, who watched him warily. “Look, I don’t know who you are, but I’m a curious person, okay? I was just told that these people had found a boy far away from all settlements, and I thought, ‘that’s very interesting. I wonder who he is and where he came from’. Why don’t you tell me, for curiosity’s sake?”

The boy still glared at him, but it seemed cooled a little, now. “My name is Marteth and I was raised by pixies. I was too!” he added, as Flairé opened his mouth.

“I’m not doubting you,” Flairé said quickly.

“Yet,” the boy tacked on.

“Never,” Flairé answered. Pixies were secretive, tiny little fairy-like creatures, sentient but possessing a simple and other-worldly intelligence. They usually lived in swamps and played tricks on travellers. Flairé had never heard of them raising a kalmaeirin child, but here was one child, ragged, tough, wiry, not ill-fed, in the middle of nowhere. “You know, you remind me of people in my family.”

Marteth looked at him sideways. “How?”

“Well, you look a little like my mother, especially when you’re glaring at me like that.” Marteth scrunched up his eyes with an expression of disgust. Flairé chuckled a little, not unkindly, and went on. “And you sort of act like her, too, when she’s angry. She gets all cold and prickly like that.”

Marteth looked at him frostily. “Well, she has the right idea of how to deal with strange people, then.”

Flairé blinked, trying to connect the two thoughts. “Would you like to meet her?”

“Not really,” the boy answered. “I want to find my mother.”

“Your real mother, or the pixie who raised you?”

Marteth thought for a while. “Both. But preferably my pixie.”

“I see.” Flairé, too, thought, and then came to a decision. “May I help you find your mother?”

“What?” exclaimed one of the miner elves. “You can’t just let him go back into the wilderness. He’ll die!”

“He seems to have done all right so far,” Flairé answered drily. “If that’s what he wants, I’m not going to stop him. He’s his own master. And so young to be his own master…”

Marteth glowered. “Flairé-person is right. I’m not going to die. And I’m my own master. But my mother will only come back if I’m alone. I don’t need you big clumsy people scaring her away again.”

Flairé began to say that he wasn’t clumsy, and then guessed that he might seem so to a tiny, dragonfly-winged pixie.

“Is there anything else I can do to help you out?” the young prince asked, unwilling to stop the spirited boy and yet equally unwilling to not take responsibility for his welfare.

Marteth stood and pointed to the door. Flairé followed the boy outside and waved the miners back when they tried to follow. Marteth led him around to the back of the hut and a little way up the hill. He dug around in a pocket with a grimy hand and pulled something out. “Can you tell me what this is?”

Flairé took it, a small band of severely tarnished metal. “I think it’s a bracelet, a decoration for your wrist. A bit small, though.” He rubbed some of the encrusted dirt off and tried to find out what kind of metal it was under the tarnish; he thought it might be silver.

Then he saw what it was and his heart froze.

“What’s the matter?” Marteth demanded impatiently. “What’s that scared look for? It’s not going to bite you.” When Flairé didn’t answer, he went on. “I might, though, if you don’t tell me.” Later, Flairé would find out that that was a joke.

“This… engraving says… Hciristial,” Flairé whispered. “Do you know who that is?”

Marteth’s expression clearly said “Do I give a hoot?” but in the face of Flairé’s sudden seriousness, he simply said, “No.”

“That was my baby brother’s name,” Flairé said softly. “He was stolen from my mother and father when he was only a few days old.” He looked up suddenly. “How long have you lived with the pixies?”

“Ever since I can remember,” Marteth answered, equally serious. “Am… am I your brother?”

Flairé knelt and looked closely at him. Marteth looked searchingly back, something yearning in his eyes.

“Yes,” said Flairé, pulling his brother into a hug. “Yes, you are truly my brother, and Zela’s son.”

Marteth stood still, unsure of how to respond to the hug. Eventually, his arms crept around his brother, and his proud head lowered until it rested on his shoulder. “I… have… a kalmaeirin family.”

“Yes,” Flairé said again. “Will you at least come and meet the rest of them before you go back to the pixies?”

“I will,” Marteth said, looking his brother in the eye and giving a firm nod of his head.

“And one more thing: do you know of any more children raised by pixies?”

“No, why?”

“I had three more baby brothers, all vanished in the night…” Flairé smiled hopefully.

“I don’t know.”

“Well, I’ll go on hoping they’re alive, too, then. Now then! North-east we go! Mother’s in the Dragonland city.”

The miners watched them go, puzzled looks on their faces. Flairé waved cheerfully to them before the two newly reunited brothers climbed the long hill out of the valley.

 

“The frustrating thing is that we can’t keep you,” the elf-woman Youlastal said to Zela and the silver dragon, recovering groggily behind bars in a stone room with golden sunlight streaming through one window. “You’re far too recognizable, Aghazi, and you, Lady Zela.” She tilted her head to one side. “Of course, if you disappeared, it would only begin sooner. Perhaps that would not be a bad thing, but we’re not ready.”

“What would only begin sooner?” Zela asked sullenly. “What’s this all about?”

“You don’t know?”

“Of course I don’t. I’ve been here for months and heard nothing. Obviously you have been going to a great deal of trouble never to let any details slip.”

“I assumed you knew more than that,” Youlastal. “Else why would you come sniffing around here, the way you do, forest woman?”

“Something got out, at least,” Zela said defiantly, though she had to put her hand to her head to quell the pain. “The realms are filled with rumours of unrest. Now tell me what you’re doing!”

“Why don’t you ask Aghazi?” smiled the other, and left the room. “Gilzellen! Are you ready to go?”

“Where are they going?” Zela asked, looking up at the silver dragon’s iridescent blue eyes.

“Probably fleeing into exile in the east,” the silver said. “They will either take us with them, or deal with us here, though… I don’t think they will kill us.”

“I’m not afraid to die,” Zela said. “I’m only afraid of what it will do to Flaer.” She shook away that thought before tears could come to her eyes. “Is your name Aghazi?”

“That is my dragonname. You can continue to call me Silver. I know, I’m not the only silver dragon,” she said quickly, forestalling Zela’s confused question, “but the rest of my family, especially my clutch brothers, are all named things like Silverwing and Silvertail. My mother is named Quicksilver, and my father is Truesilver. In your tongue, of course.”

“Of course,” Zela said. “I’m glad to know. What is all this talk of treason?”

The silver sighed and shifted. Zela rubbed her aching head again – concussion, at the very least – and saw that deep red blood was trickling slowly from puncture marks in the dragon’s neck. She got up and took off the torn-off part of her dress, tearing it into strips and wiping away the blood from the wounds, trying to staunch them.

“Thank you,” said Silver. “It’s a strange tale, and shocking, but it’s true.”

“Go on,” Zela said, somewhat impatiently.

“Well, in a nutshell – we believe in the Lord God, don’t we?”

“Yes…”

“And in His angels, those who appeared to you and taught you, Lady Zela?”

“Yes…?”

“How many were there?”

Zela paused in her ministrations and thought. “I don’t actually remember. There were a number of them.”

“A hundred? Seven?”

“There were seven great angels, archangels, and some others. Not a hundred. Not more than twenty, I think.”

“What if I told you that there is only one angel?”

Zela jerked backwards in surprise, backing against the stone wall. “What!?”

“That is what some are saying now. I do not know why, but apparently they believe in this strongly enough that they wish to make everyone believe the same, and to remove those from power who believe in seven archangels by the hand of God.”

Zela shook her head in disbelief, and then stopped and held it in pain. “That’s unbelievable. That can’t be. That’s completely irrational.”

Silver’s head drooped. “I know. I don’t know how this idea got started, either. No one knows who first thought it, or else they’re protecting them. I was approached about a month ago, and I went along with them for a while to try and learn more, but when I learned that they are planning to remove King Kiirstril-“

“Truly?” Zela cried. “This – oh, this is awful!”

The silver nodded morosely. “Hopefully my outcries earlier helped, but I doubt it. Only the ones who were attacking us outright will be identified. The cancer will still be there. And we will not be…”

“That’s right,” said Youlastal. “You’re coming with us, into the east.”

“How far east?”

“As far east as we can get. Come on! Come quietly, or we’ll tie you up and carry you like grain.”

“Understood,” Zela responded, standing still. “But I am not like that.”

“You won’t come quietly?”

“No.”

“Well, then…” Youlastal reached behind her back and brought out a needle with clear liquid in a bag. She opened the cage, and the silver dragon roared. “Well, you’re an easier target, anyway.” The silver pulled her nose back and the elf chuckled. “Don’t want to go to sleep? It will make it much easier on everyone.”

“I stand with the Lady Zela,” snarled Silver. “She has fought and suffered for a complete stranger.”

“As would we, if there were others unknown whom we needed to protect,” answered Youlastal openly.

Zela blinked, surprised by the sudden earnestness, and nearly missed Youlastal’s next jab at Silver. She jumped forward and grabbed Youlastal’s arms, grappling with her.

“What?” gasped Silver suddenly. “Lady Zela, I hear someone.”

“So… do… I,” Zela responded, gritting her teeth as she fought against the elf.

“In my head.”

“What?”

“She says her name is Yoeath, and that I should keep talking to her inside my head. She says to keep the sleeping poison away from me as long as you can.”

“Yoeath!” Zela cried. “Thank the stars!”

“It will not be enough,” the elf she was wrestling with responded. “One unicorn will not be able to take you away. Gilzellan! I need the others.”

A dragonish grunt outside was the response, and the other two elves rushed into the room. Silver pulled the cage door shut before they could get there, and held it firmly.

The two elves looked at each other and took out sleeping poison of their own. Silver barked at them, coughing fire over her hand so they couldn’t stab it. But even a dragon needs to breathe to create fire, and they are incapable of circular breathing like the kalmaei, and when she did, one darted in and jabbed her with the needle, squeezing the bag until it emptied.

Silver immediately showed the effects, her hide eyelids half drooping over her blue eyes, and her paw dropping limply to the floor. She still breathed fire, but it was a purr now, a mere trickle that extinguished itself on the floor before her face. Within a minute she was asleep.

There was the sound of roaring outside, and one of the blue dragons stumbled back across the doorway. There was a bright flash of metal, then a bright flash of flame. A tenor shout.

“Marteth, stay back! Yo, keep him back!”

Youlastal’s eyes widened in panic, and she dropped the sleeping poison, wrenched herself away from Zela, and drew a small axe from her belt. Zela’s eyes widened, too, in surprise, and she flung herself back in a ready crouch.

“Tark, Zalmith, we need to go NOW!” shouted Youlastal, advancing on Zela in her corner.

Zela lashed out with a kick, and looked over helplessly as the other two elves rapidly tied ropes to Silver’s four paws and then to a dragon’s harness.

Youlastal swung sideways at Zela, catching her arm. Zela hissed and tried to ignore the pain, punching against the other’s armour with her good hand, and tried hooking her leg, but the other dodged it. Her opponent swung again, and there was no room to manoeuvre in the corner. This blow caught her across the stomach, tracing a long shallow gash.

Zela leaned against the wall, glaring, helpless. She hated being helpless. She hated it with as much passion as anything – except injustice. Her vision was tunnelling.

Youlastal raised her axe for another swing, and something sprang on her from behind, knocking her sideways and to the floor.

Youlastal rolled and came up in a crouch, and the person who had attacked her stomped on her axe before she could pick it up. The elf looked around and saw that her allies had gone in a panic, without taking Silver. She sprinted out of the room.

Zela collapsed, and the person who had saved her cried out and knelt down swiftly beside her, taking her into his arms gently. It was Flairé.

“My son?” Zela asked, uncertainly.

“Mother, oh, Mother, I’m sorry I’m so late. I only just got into the city, and then I found Yoeath galloping along the streets, and I found out you had vanished and I came straight away with her…” It seemed that Flairé had inherited his father’s tendency to babble, though when he was anxious, not embarrassed.

“Hush, son,” Zela said warmly. “I’ll live. Help me up. We need to help Silver, the dragon.”

Yoeath stood behind her, her horn faintly glowing, her eyes alight with worry. “Zela?”

“I’ll live,” Zela repeated, and then caught sight of the boy on Yoeath’s back. “Yoeath?”

“What is it?” asked Yoeath calmly.

“…Thank you for coming to find me,” Zela said. “I’ll never go anywhere without a sword again, though. Or maybe several. But who is that?”

Flairé’s face lit up with joy and pride. “This is my brother, your son, Mother.”

Zela’s face went absolutely blank. “…What?”

“Your son,” Flairé repeated. He went to Yoeath’s side and swung down the boy. “This is Marteth – I mean, Hciristial, who was stolen so long ago by pixies.”

“Pixies?” Zela said. Her mind seemed to be having trouble accepting news.

“Yes,” Flairé beamed. “He still has his bracelet.”

“Is this person really my mother?” Marteth asked coolly. “She’s hurt. You should fix her before it becomes infected.”

“Words of wisdom indeed,” Flairé responded, as Zela raised her eyebrows at her new son’s insolence.

“We need someone to help Silver,” Zela said. “Are the knights coming?”

“Yes,” said Yoeath. “Get on, Zela. I will carry you.”

First, Zela leaned down and studied Marteth. “Yes, I am your mother. I… can recognize my children. And your name is Marteth now?”

“Yes,” replied Marteth, somewhat impressed by his mother.

“Pride,” Zela mused. “It is not far off from the truth, I think. I may still call you Hciristial, and I can’t answer for your father.”

Knights and golden dragons rushed in, and one elf injected Silver with an antidote. She began to come around.

“Mother,” said Flairé, “he wants to return to his pixie mother.”

Zela hesitated, torn by conflict. “We can discuss that later.”

“Of course. I’m sorry, Mother,” Flairé said softly. “Let’s just go home and play music together.”

“No,” Zela replied shortly. “We need to fix the mess here first.”

“I can do that,” Silver said, crawling to her feet. “I thank you very much for your help, Lady Zela, and all your efforts on my behalf. You have probably saved my life, and certainly my freedom, nearly at the cost of your own. Now you should go and rest.”

“It was all I could do,” Zela said. “Thank you for telling me what is going on. They may call me a spy from the Moonland all they like but I am not. I only want to know so that we can sooth the unrest.”

 

They all went back to the Moonland, where Flaer wept with joy to find his son again, which surprisingly didn’t lose him any respect in Marteth’s eyes. Marteth himself needed instruction in almost everything, especially in proper dress, though he was very proud to have shimmering silk clothes. He talked back like anything, sending Flaria into fits of dismay, though she never lost her patience and adored her little brother dearly. Menad was nowhere to be found, and Zela found that he had left to explore the wild with a friend.

Flairé sent a message to Tam, saying “Taking care of Mother. How is your investigation? Come join us!”

Tam sent a message back after a month, saying “No can do. Can you come here instead? Very twisted business. Please come!”

So Flairé saddled his brown horse – his second horse; kalmaeirin horses lived as long as fifty years, and he had already seen one pass away – and prepared to leave for the North, leaving Marteth to the tender mercies of his mother and sister.

“So, be patient with Mother, please,” he asked Marteth before he left. “She’s not so strong in the patience department, and she’s a perfectionist… But she will teach you everything she knows willingly and with love, even if you don’t see it so.”

“I will try, Flairé,” Marteth answered seriously. “I was watching her sparring with Sir Gyoriing yesterday. I want to fight like they do.”

“You will be able to,” Flairé reassured him. “But it takes many years of hard practice. You understand?”

“Yes,” Marteth answered determinedly. “I will be a great warrior when you come back.”

Flairé almost pulled a face at his brother’s goal in life, and his naivety to practice, but didn’t. “I look forward to sparring with you. Goodbye!”

He arrived in the Moonland city a week later and went straight to Tam’s parents’ house.

Tam was waiting for him on the steps, lounging casually against the rail. He looked cool as a cucumber, but Flairé, looking at him, thought he looked different somehow. His eyes were more shadowed, as if he’d been sleepless for many nights more than he could stand.

“Hey there,” he said, as Flairé left his horse at the bottom of the stairs and sprang up two at a time to meet him. Flairé hugged him, grinning cheerfully. “I can see you’ve been well, at least.”

“Please, tell me what you’ve been up to!” Flairé said eagerly. “I just need to let my horse into your field.”

“Go ahead, and then come up to my room,” Tam said, smiling back same as ever.

 

Flairé took the outside route – climbing the wall – and slipped through Tam’s window and bounced on his bed. “All right. What’s this about twisted?”

“Oh, I want to hear what you’ve been up to first,” Tam said, leaning against the fireplace and running a hand through his hair. The blue dye in his bangs was fading back to brown again.

“Well, not too long after we parted ways, I found my long-lost younger brother-“

Tam leaned forward, eyes alight with interest. “Really? Which one?”

“The eldest. Hciristial. He calls himself Marteth now. It fits, too. He has such a stiff neck for a pre-adolescent, and he wants to be a warrior. Oh, he was raised by pixies. He has black hair and brown eyes, and glares at everyone unless they’re being particularly loving to him.”

Tam laughed heartily. “Well, go on.”

“And then I went to the Dragonland city, because I’d heard that Mother was there, and I wanted Marteth to at least meet the rest of his family before he went back to his pixie mother…”

“What, he’s not going to stay with you?”

Flairé mock-glared at his friend. “If you’d keep your mouth shut, I’ll tell you everything in order.”

“Okay, okay, I’ll shut up.”

“Anyway, so I went to the Moonland, and the first person I met was Yoeath, who’d gone with Mother, and she was galloping down the main road. I asked her what the matter was, and she said that some people had kidnapped Mother. So I followed her, and found Mother fighting three kalmaei and three dragons, and she was in a prison cell along with a silver dragon. So Yo and I managed to distract the dragons enough that they had to leave before the Dragon knights got there, and before they hurt Mother and the dragon too badly.”

Tam opened his mouth and then shut it again.

“Well, they’d been hurt when they were kidnapped, and when I got there, one of them was trying to kill Mother rather than have her escape and tell Kiirstril what was going on. So it wasn’t my fault,” Flairé growled mock-defensively. “Oh, so what was going on was that we have religious revolutionaries in the Dragonland.”

Tam leaned forward suddenly, intent. “Really? About seven archangels or one angel?”

“Yes. How did you know?”

“I’ll tell you in a moment.”

“All right. So the silver dragon went to tell Kiirstril everything, while Mother and Yo and Marteth and I returned to the Moonland. So we don’t know how long Marteth’s going to stay, either. So I didn’t get to finish exploring the mountains, but I think that’s all right considering the circumstances.”

“I hope you get a chance to go back soon,” Tam said. “It’s good to know the world from a personal point of view.”

“I know,” Flairé said, smiling. “You say that often enough, and Mother too.” His smile faded. “Now, tell me your story! You clearly know more than I do.”

“There is a Black Unicorn,” Tam said softly. “I’m certain of it. It’s out there, in the forest. It is insane, as those people we met were saying. And yet… it’s not completely lost all reason. I don’t know what it is. It’s certainly not natural. And I’m not insane!”

“Why didn’t you ask for Yoeath to come with me?” Flairé asked.

“My father has a unicorn friend. Yowiith, the White Wind. He told me about, well, how unicorns think and behave. If there is a Black Unicorn out there – I could be wrong, you know – it’s completely aberrant.”

Flairé nodded slowly. “So how did you find out about it?”

Tam frowned. “Well, the first thing I did when I got back was prowl around looking for more solid rumours. I know our people travel fast, but the physically closer to the source means more people might agree on what they say and I didn’t trust the mere word of those travellers.” He leaned back against the wall. “I soon found darker tales. People have disappeared from small villages, grown people, not babies abducted by pixies.” He smiled a little. “And there seems to be a miasma of fear in the west. Not oppressive, but noticeable if you’ve lived there for any length of time before now.”

“Then I got caught up in court intrigue for a while and had to leave that chase for a week. Princess Muila has been dropping hints about this ‘one angel’ theory, quietly, though even that seems unusually open for even her combative nature. Princess Layalin is very unhappy, because she loves her twin and believes in seven.”

“And Kylyra?” Flairé asked.

Tam smirked. “Oblivious, lover-boy.”

“Hey!” Flairé cried, hopping up and chasing Tam around the room. “I never said anything about me!”

“But it’s obvious,” Tam said, dodging around an armchair, laughing.

Flairé slowed down and stopped. “I don’t know about that, actually. Not anymore.”

“How so?” Tam asked, stopping and half turning towards him.

“I don’t think she’s the right person, somehow. I don’t think I’ve met the right girl yet.”

“Welcome to my world,” Tam beamed.

Flairé laughed and put a hand to his face. “So how does she feel about her sisters is what I meant?”

“She’s oblivious to them too. She just spends her time playing with her friends, same as ever. She’s growing into quite a beauty, though.”

Flairé waved that away with a roll of his eyes. “Go on.”

Tam grinned, opened his mouth as if to continue teasing, and then stopped, smiling ruefully. “Well, you know the girl who broke into my house when I first met you?”

“The one you never told me about? Yes?”

“Well, I finally found out who she was, though I always knew what she was looking for. She’s Princess Muila’s maid and friend. She was looking for evidence that I am a bad influence on society, probably to get me shut up out of the way.”

“Out of the way of what?”

“I don’t know, and that’s what scares me,” Tam said openly. “So I had to spend a few days tangoing with the political system to smooth things over; Erd is completely confused and distracted over his daughter right now and couldn’t help me out at all. And of course Marotheth hates my guts and would love to see me in prison.”

“Oh dear,” Flairé said sympathetically. “How did you deal with that?”

“Oh, same way I always do,” Tam said with a sigh. “You have to have been raised in the Unicorn-land to really understand, but I’ll tell you later, after I finish.”

“Right, go on.”

“Well, actually there’s not much more to say, really. This last week I’ve been trying to find out what happened to those missing people. I went pretty deep into the forest. I think it was probably too dangerous to do, now, but I’m pretty sure I got back all right. The last two days I’ve been here, waiting for you.”

“And here I am.”

“I want to head out west tomorrow with you and really get into the forest. I’d feel more confident if there were two of us working together, and there’s no one I trust more than you, Flairé m’lad.”

Flairé smiled gratefully. “And I you, Tatamkanai.”

Tam made a face as if he’d bitten a lemon. “Thanks.”

 

Chapter 4          Chapter 6

December 9, 2009

Adhemlenei: Sword’s Innocence: Chapter 1

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Prologue          Chapter 2

 

Chapter 1

Years passed around the fledgling people that had appeared on the earth. They encountered the flowers of spring, the shade of summer, the winds of fall, and the snow of winter, and made names for everything they found in these things.

At first, they lived off what they found on the land. But their people, small and scattered as they were, were too many to do that for many years. So it was that Flar, the noble leader of one group, headed a little to the southwest, out of the forest, and built a village to try farming and gardening instead of hunting. His people became great horse-riders, as well. Flar was a good friend of Zela, and still went to talk to her often.

The most northerly group, led by Erd, kept hunting to find food, but Erd himself retreated to one of the northern mountains and built a town of stone there.

The eastern group that was led by the elf named Kiirstril also continued hunting, making their home in caves scattered through the eastern cliffs.

The southern group, led by the logical Nu, took to farming even more readily than Flar’s people. They cultivated a great area of the meadows around the great river that flowed through the region

Then it was that the unicorns came. From the north, further north than the kalmaei had yet ventured, white horse-like creatures with shimmering pearly horns in their foreheads came south and met the kalmaei. Some of them grew to be great friends with the kalmaei, allowing them to ride them like the horses of Flar’s people – though the unicorns were greater than the horses. They spoke the language of the kalmaei effortlessly, and with great intelligence.

Zela was walking in her woods one day, the woods she had not moved from since the day she woke, when she saw a flash of white light. Quick as thought, she ducked behind a tree.

The tree was already occupied by a dark-haired elf, who signalled for her to be quiet.

“There’s a unicorn coming through here,” he said. “I’m going to catch it and make it my friend.”

“You don’t have any idea what you are doing, do you?” Zela asked him, amused. “They’re much smarter than you.”

The elf thought for a while. “I don’t know. But I do want a unicorn friend.”

“The best way to do that would be to introduce yourself civilly,” Zela told him, stepping out from behind the tree. The elf tried to pull her back, but was too late.

A soft white unicorn stood in the clearing, watching her.

“Hello,” Zela said to it. “I am Zela. This is my home, but you are welcome here.”

“You can call me Yoeath,” said the unicorn. “I am passing through on my own business, but thank you for your hospitality.”

The elf popped out from behind the tree. “You aren’t going anywhere!”

“Yoeath will go where she pleases,” said the unicorn rather coldly, “without any reference to such arrogance.” Zela moved to stand between the elf and the unicorn, her long blue skirt hanging loose to her feet.

“Who are you, anyway?” Zela asked defiantly.

“I am Marotheth, and Lord Erd relies heavily on my counsel.”

“I remember your name,” Zela said thoughtfully. “He thinks you are wise, but I disagree. It doesn’t matter to me, anyway. Please be polite while you are in the forest I roam.”

The elf pulled himself up proudly, and then launched himself bodily at Zela. “You are in my way, foolish lady!”

Zela neatly flipped him over and laid him on the leaves. “I am not helpless.”

“Nor am I,” the unicorn said unexpectedly. “Let us leave this Marotheth and I will tell you where I am going.”

“I do not understand,” Yoeath the unicorn said, “why he thought violence would win him my good opinion.”

Zela smiled easily. “Each is entitled to his own ideas, however wrong they may be. He will realize his mistakes in time.”

“But to use violence so quickly-“

“Some people do. No one has been hurt yet, and the lords, I am sure, deal justice where it is due.”

The unicorn would have frowned if she were able to. “I still do not understand you kalmaei, but I am still young. You are the eldest, yes?”

“I am… but that doesn’t matter, does it?”

“I would like to learn more of the kalmaei.”

“We’re very strange mammals,” Zela said, smiling.

Yoeath blinked back. “I realized that, at least.”

“Where was it you were going?”

“To the fields of Lord Flar’s people. Would you come? There is a great gathering.”

“Of unicorns?”

Yoeath only blinked mysteriously.

 

At the fields a week from that chance encounter, many were gathered – Lord Erd, his wife Lady Gaila, and their unicorn companions, Lord Flar, his wife Lady Stialia, Lord Kiirstril and Lady Shlaes of the Eastern People, and Lord Nu and Lady Yoia of the Southern People, and many of all their people. There were some unicorns, but fewer than Zela had expected.

“What are we waiting for?” Zela asked Flar surreptitiously once she got close to him.

Flar inclined his head towards her in an exasperated fashion. “I haven’t the foggiest. A unicorn from the north came and told me to bring the peoples together, and so I have. I sent a messenger to you, but she says she missed you.”

“I’m sure she did,” Zela replied. “Yoeath the unicorn told me as she was passing by, and we came together.”

“What’s that? There is a flash in the eastern sky that is not a star, for it’s noon,” said Kirstril, pointing. “What is it? Is it what we are here to meet?”

“Yes,” said a unicorn. “Look closely, and you will see the others, who do not gleam in the sun.”

“I see them!” cried Nu in great excitement. “The shining ones are long, with great wings, and tongues of flame, and the smaller ones are like great birds with four legs.”

So the dragons and griffons met the elves. A great company of each landed in the grass around the cultivated field.

“Greetings,” said a great golden dragon and a brown griffon. “We have come a great distance to meet the kalmaei of which we have been told.”

“But how were you told?” asked Flar, standing unafraid next to the creatures’ heads.

“The unicorns told us of you, and said that we should meet. We knew them long ago, and they are the only beings of magic in the world.”

“Magic? What is magic?” asked Yoia, lady of the Southern People.

A tawny griffon folded itself up beside her with a stretch and a grin. “Haven’t you heard of the tales mothers tell to children? Magic is anything that is otherwise impossible. It is impossible to create bright light without energy, not like fireflies but like the sun, but the unicorns do it all the time. It is impossible to speak through the mind, but unicorns do it with each other, and sometimes with dragons. I think it’s supposed to be very difficult, though.”

“So they told the dragons, and the dragons told you?” asked Nu.

“Exactly.”

 

The years passed, and the tiny nations each bonded with a different sentient creature: the Northern People with the unicorns, the Southern People with the griffons, and the Eastern people with the Dragons. The Central People, Flar’s people, entertained guests and friends of all kinds, but remained renowned as horse-riders, their own people, lovers of the coldly gleaming moon and stars rather than the breathing of the trees or the music of the rivers or the majesty of the mountains.

With the aid of their new friends, each nation spread more widely over the land, growing further and further afield from the tiny region where they had begun, the forest they called the Yalekedma. Some called it the Kallakedma, the Forest of the Woman, meaning Zela, but she disliked this name and forcefully corrected those who used it. The kalmaei built cities, bigger and grander than the last, and great houses and castles of stone, for safety against wild animals and the weather; except in the south, in the land of the griffons, where the people built wooden or straw huts like nests of strange rough beauty, or lived in tents of cloth and hide.

In the Dragonlands, the dragons showed their small friends how to find metal, and soon knights and guards to defend ordinary people from ordinary people from malicious danger in the wild were honing their skills and meeting at tournaments to test their abilities against each other with steel swords and armour. Flar, Stialia, Nu, and Yoia were among those not entirely happy by this, but the romance of the image took the second generation by storm, and even part of the first, Zela among them. She learned it as an extension of her favourite pastime, dance, though it had a practical use as well, living out in the forest as she did, and competed with the best in the Unicornlands. Some years she vied with the others in tournaments. Few had the accuracy or the swiftness that she and Yoeath displayed on green fields in the summer.

It was during her frequent stays in the Yohahcol, the White City of the Unicornpeople, that she became friends with Lord – now King – Erd, and his wife Gaila and his three daughters. The eldest, Muila, was a fierce defender of her younger sisters, and rather haughty towards the rather wild waif of the woods. Layalin, Muila’s younger twin, was a gentle girl with long curly red hair who loved to sing as much as Zela loved to dance, and they spent a great deal of time together. The youngest, Kylyralessa, was a merry golden-haired child only just born.

Layalin and Zela spent many years visiting each other, perfecting their roles of singer and dancer. Yoeath and Layalin’s unicorn friend Helith would spend time with the girls too, but would more often roam on their own.

One of these times, in the Yalekedma, Zela was dancing as passionately as she ever had, when a young elf with long black hair and brilliant green eyes nearly fell forward into the clearing.

Zela landed awkwardly, frozen, staring in astonishment. Layalin’s voice cut off with a squeak.

“I-I-I’m sorry,” stammered the elf. “I was just wandering, you know, for fun, and I heard your singing, and then I saw your dancing, and I-I just couldn’t help it…”

Zela laughed then. “Relax, m’lad. We’re flattered you liked it so much.”

“Aren’t you Flar’s son?” Layalin asked from between her fingers covering her embarrassed face.

The elf looked taken aback. “Yes, I am. Flaer. Who are you?”

“I am Zela, and this is Princess Layalin of the Unicornland. I know your parents well, and you certainly do resemble them. Would you dance with me, Prince Flaer?”

“I would love to dance with you, Lady Zela,” replied Flaer, reaching out his hands in response to Zela’s gesture. He was ordinarily at ease and self-confident in his surroundings, but stumbling through the woods into the open as he had embarrassed him into confusion. Layalin took a little longer to recover; her voice was a little shaky at first, but it soon soared out pure as it had before.

Flaer was a very good dancer, Zela soon found. They were a perfect match in height, and while it seemed that Flaer had never trained as a fighter, that did not take away much from his skill as a dancer.

After the song had finished, Flaer still seemed inclined to continue on in awkward silence, but he was saved by the approach of the unicorns.

“There is an elf approaching,” Yoeath said. “He has brown hair and rides a horse, leading anoth- oh, hello.”

“This is Prince Flaer of the Moonland,” Zela said. “Prince Flaer, these are Yoeath and Helith.”

“I’m pleased to meet you,” Flaer said automatically. “I think the person coming is my friend Gyoriing. He’s officially my bodyguard. And my dearest friend.”

“And unofficially,” said the tall elf on the horse, entering the clearing behind him, “the one who chases after him and makes sure he doesn’t get lost every time he gets some fool idea to go wandering off into the trackless woods alone and without food or warmth. Hello, Flaer. I thought you might want my company, and barring that, your horse. But I see that you have found much more engaging friends than I. Greetings, ladies, unicorns. My name is Gyoriing, and I am a Knight of the Moonland.”

“Pleased to meet you, Gyoriing,” replied Zela, introducing everyone all over again.

 

And so happened the fateful – though inevitable – meeting between Zela and Flaer, and between Gyoriing and Layalin. As the years passed, and they met more and more often, their friendship grew and deepened, and Flaer fell in love with Zela. They went to tournaments together, danced together, rode together, and pretty much anytime that Flaer was not assisting his father in the rule of the Moonland, they were together. Layalin might have felt left out, but where Flaer went with Zela, there also went Gyoriing, and Layalin greatly admired the tall knight.

Flaer, at last, took up the study of combat from Gyoriing, though he was no natural fighter. His skill was more with words, being a passionate and quick-witted speaker, and he and his younger brother Lyrestan, who shared this skill, were invaluable to their parents as they led their people. Flaer’s name, the Valiant, had been given to him for his fearless self-confidence, his habit of diving in to verbally save people from injustice, but now it began to better suit him in all things.

Gyoriing, on the other hand, pestered Flaer to help him learn to play musical instruments better, and after many weary hours, over years, of practice, he became rather good with a cello-like instrument. Gyoriing was a third-generation kalma, but his parents and grandparents were still developing their skills the same that he was. But he was already one of the best knights in the Moonland, perhaps in all the Adhemelenei.

It was in this time that Flaer told Zela why the angels had given her that name. “In the Moonland, without thought to your name at all, the sound ze has come to mean ‘a sword’… or more specifically, the sound that a sword makes when drawn. The angels knew what you would become. You are a guardian, a wild free creature of the forest who guards those who wander in; I have seen you fight and it is not for attack but defence and the pleasure of your skill.”

Zela smiled in honest pride. “I am glad that you think that about my name. I have not thought about it for many years. I think you are right about my intentions, and I hope I always remain that way. You, too, are a guardian, though you don’t have much chance to prove it with Gyoriing always at your side.”

Flaer mirrored her smile happily.

 

The day that Flaer asked Zela to be his wife was, for them, great and terrible.

Zela was in her home when Flaer came to see her that time. She looked up, smiling, as he leaned through the doorway. “Good morning.”

“Good morning… Zela… I want to ask you something.”

Something in his voice disturbed the kalla, and she paused and glanced at him sidelong, frowning slightly. There was a long silence as Flaer’s courage deserted him.

“I know what you must be going to say,” whispered Zela finally. “You love me.”

Flaer opened his mouth and closed it again. He nodded once, almost imperceptibly. There was another long silence.

“I do not wish to be in love with anyone,” Zela said softly, without moving. “To tie my feelings to one person… it would prevent me from loving the world the way it ought to be…”

“Give me time to decide, Flaer. This is a harder choice than it looks.”

Flaer nodded again and left.

 

Flar came upon his son, standing at the window of one of the older towers of the castle of the Moonland city.

“What is it? You look grieved about something.” He leaned on the window ledge beside his son.

“Father… It’s not really… well, I’m in love.”

Flar smiled. “Who is the lucky lass?”

Flaer smiled, but out at the sky. “She is beyond lucky, beyond fortunate… she is blessed. And I am the unlucky one… I love the Lady Zela…”

“Oh?” Flar straightened, glancing at his son, and smiled more broadly. “Perhaps you are right about being unlucky, though I, as your father, would disagree with that… Some might say your choice is audacious… Everyone loves Lady Zela… do you know why?”

“Because she is the First-born?”

“Because she is a symbol of the nights before days. She is a symbol of what is already passing. She… retains a wilderness in her that we, living in the cities, have lost… Yet she is not the only one who lives in the forest, nor does she shun the cities, but she is… She is, in a greater measure than most of us, dancing fire and singing water and the green of the world and the laughter of stars all rolled up into one body.” Flar concluded, hesitantly.

“That is why she is beyond me, and all of us,” Flaer murmured. He clenched his hands. “I should not have told her!”

Flar shrugged. “What’s done is done. I can say nothing to help you there.”

“Our relationship before was wonderful, but now it will be destroyed… and she has lost something… she has gained an awareness… I can’t say what I…”

“I understand. What did she say, exactly?”

“She said she needed time to think about it, but that she fears loving me will prevent her from loving the world.”

Flar laughed outright. “While she is the first of us to awaken, she is missing something by not having fallen in love before. I love the world all the more because of Stialia at my side. Still, I understand. You think she should be left untouched lest she become less of a symbol of that wilderness we feel less of in here…”

“Thank you, Father.”

 

Zela wandered aimlessly in the wood in those days, thinking and pondering until her mind rebelled and all she could do was feel half-alive in her state of indecision.

The Prince was true and honest, she knew that much. How he had come to love her so deeply, she could only guess; she did not know her own loveliness. And yet, her heart wavered between the irrevocable acceptance of love and the desire for freedom and solitude that had been so precious to her before she met Flaer. Her mind reeled from the unimaginable future together with the kalma who nearly worshipped her. Then silence took her thoughts as she lost herself in the glory of the woods. Her mind remained troubled, but it was quieted, pushed away again.

Thus it was she nearly tripped over a prone figure cast carelessly on a slope of mossy stone in a gentle hollow. He slept, a slight smile caressing his face, but a tear glittered on his cheek.

As Zela bent over him, mildly curious, she felt her heart change. This was no stranger to her. Unawares, he had entered her heart and now she was caught, held fast from the very moment he had begun to speak to her of love.

His face was beautiful, contented and resigned. She knelt beside him and reached out to touch the tear on his cheek, to touch his hair… but drew back, uncertain and suddenly shy.

His eyes opened, emerald wells of colour that sparkled in his pale face, paler than usual. He sat up and turned his head towards her.

There was silence for a long time. Zela did not blush. Love was too complete for embarrassment. But he read in her face something different and his shy smile grew slightly, incredulously. He held out his hand… and Zela vanished.

She had stood and ran almost faster than thought, afraid suddenly.

 

Two days later, after both young fools had shed tears of doubt and spent sleepless nights wondering if they had not dreamed it all, they met again.

This time they both smiled, shyly, welcoming each other. Flaer spoke hesitantly. “Lady Zela, I am sorry to have caused you trouble…”

She darted forward and caught him around waist, looking up at him – for she was as tall as he, but now she bent to look at him pleadingly. “Dance with me,” she said.

They danced, relaxing into the unspoken rapport that always sprang up between them whenever they moved together. At last, Zela said: “There is no need to call me Lady anymore, Flaer.”

Flaer’s eyes flashed with delight. “Then… you… I love you, L- Zela!”

Zela gazed at him steadily, an accepting smile touching her mouth. “Ah, yes, finally I know I love you back.” She leaned forward slightly.

As gently as the sunlight, he kissed her and both found their hearts too light for dreams.

 

They rode to a tournament together a year later, clad in silver armour and looking forward to the feeling of dancing flight and the matching of skill to skill that sparring gave them. They were meeting with peoples of all nations, and Flar himself was going with them, as well as red Crhaegarrk, greatest of dragons, the leader of the Dragonland beside Kiirstril and Shlaes. Erd and Gaila were busy, though Layalin and her twin sister Muila came, and Nu and Yoia came too, and Ruring and Harn, chief among Griffons.

The people of the Moonland and Unicorn land, kalmaei and horses and unicorns, rode over the last hill, and saw the rolling valleys of the plains where the gathering was spread before them. The forest behind them was like an ocean held back by the ridge. Far in front of them, the mountains of the Dragons reared up, almost beyond sight. Ahead, the people of the Dragons were already gathering, and the people of the Griffons were just arriving from the south. Silver trumpets and warm trombones called to each other in greeting.

They had just begun to pitch their tents and begin fires when Flaer and Zela became aware of a dead silence on the left side of the camp. They turned, and saw all others turning as well, conversation halting as if cut off with a knife.

Then a dragon screamed, and fire burst into the sky from behind a silently gathering crowd. Both kalmaei took off running. A bright green dragon writhed upwards from the crowd and roared fire. The assembly scattered, crying out wildly.

A griffon sprang into the air beside the dragon, screaming more shrilly and with rage and grief.

“Kill you! Kill you!” both beasts were shrieking, chasing each other through the air and landing again where they had begun, beside two bloodied two-legged forms.

Zela darted between them, crying out to be heard over their great voices, flinging her arms out in a useless gesture of control. She leaped aside in time to avoid a fireball from the green dragon.

Fire from the other dragons shot warningly past the warring creatures, and they drew back, alarmed. Then Crhaegarrk’s deep voice thundered over the melee.

“Stop! What has happened?”

Flaer found Gyoriing at his side, grimy and blackened with smoke, but otherwise unharmed. “What happened?” the Prince asked.

“A heated argument between two kalmei turned vicious,” Gyoriing answered, pointing to one of the prone figures. “He is dead, by the other’s hand. Then the other slew himself in guilt. Now their friends fight in their memory.”

Flaer’s face was blank at first, passing through shock to horror and on to unhappy determination.

“Well. Gyoriing, go and tell my father. Lord Crhaegaark, Lord Ruring, please restrain your people in their grief before they hurt someone. Imlolthin, bring the bodies to the hospital tent to prepare them for funeral.”

He turned away to see if his father was coming as those he named hurried to do as he commanded. The dragon and griffon were held down and led away by others of their kind.

Zela stared around at the faces. She caught sight of Layalin’s face, a horrified, uncomprehending mask. Her sister Muila was impassive. Other faces were frightened, blank, confused. But some did not seem terribly surprised.

“What is wrong with you?” she demanded of those. “How can you see such a sight and be unmoved?”

Flaer turned back quickly and saw them. “My fiancée is right. Some of us have seen death before. Someone misses her step and falls from a tall building; someone is a little too slow in the forest and has his throat torn out by a wolf. But this has never happened before in the world that one would deliberately kill another. And see, the one who killed felt such despair that he killed himself. That has never happened either! And yet you see and are unmoved. What could they have been arguing about that could lead to such a thing?”

“They were arguing about who was better,” said an elf. Zela looked and recognized him as Marotheth, now captain of the Unicornland knights. He had somehow found a unicorn willing to befriend him.

Flaer’s face showed his disgust. “And that has cost us two lives meaninglessly, and perhaps four, if the dragon and griffon do not calm down. Listen to me! This must never happen again, that a sentient creature murders another sentient creature. Is it worth it? It is worth nothing! These people had friends and family just like you!”

At last, the two began to see some change in the stony faces watching him. A few broke down and sobbed, while some looked shaken.

“They will forget,” Flaer said sadly as they walked away to Flar’s tent. “People like that, who feel such anger and ego, they will forget how to feel others’ feelings. And they will feel that they are right, and that you and I, who think otherwise, are foolish and immature and weak.”

“I can’t understand how killing would change anything. It only weakens your position,” Zela said, still thinking on other lines.

“I don’t know,” Flaer said slowly. “It seems that anger causes one to lose control.”

“I understand that very well, but to kill? That is unthinkable, even in anger.”

“It is… But not to some, I suppose.”

 

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