November 10, 2011

I Know You’re Out There Somewhere: NaNoWriMo2011 – chapter 4

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Filed under: I Know You're Out There Somewhere — Tags: , , , , — Illinia @ 12:38 am

This chapter is stupidly, ridiculously long. My apologies. This will take you from the very, very beginning of Esgalwen’s D+D adventure all the way to the half-way point of the werewolf arc. You may note the quality of the writing start to go downhill very quickly. Very quickly. No, seriously. Anyway, I’ll post Chapter 5 tomorrow at some point.

I had a lot of things to say, but I’m not going to get around to saying any of them…

I’m very full! Surprise (for me) party (for a friend). This makes me sleepy and unwilling to do any work, whether it be writing, drawing, or practicing. But I think I should finish a few things before bed…

Mannnn choir is so great. Just gonna say that right now.

 

 

Chapter 4

It was about four months later. Tharash had, at some point, simply stopped showing up. Valiensin had chalked it up to absent-mindedness. “Don’t be surprised if he pops in without warning just to see how you’re doing.” He himself had let her go a month previously, wishing her luck, and fortune, and safety, and success.
So it was she found herself in a small town, mostly inhabited by Halflings, looking for work. She had acquired some of the local currency, and some measure of knowledge of the continental peoples and laws and physics, and perhaps, after a month on her own but dealing with strangers every day, a very slight lessening of her shyness.
But she was running out of money, and while her hawk could feed itself, and technically she could survive by hunting, she was not really good enough to make that practical.
So she approached a sign saying “Armed Escortes Reqwired – Pleas Inqwire Heer”, not without trepidation, and saw a Halfling, arguing with a very tall, bald, and bearded human man. Nearby was the Halfling’s cart, filled with barrels and boxes, and also nearby were two other humans. One was a tall man clad all in shining armour, and the other was a red-haired woman also in armour.
“Eh?” The Halfling saw her. “You looking for a job?”
“Y-yes. You are hiring?”
“Certainly. There be nasty creatures between here and my destination… I need a few guards. But I think four will be enough.” He named a price, and Illinia agreed to it immediately. He turned back to the very tall man with a pointed look, and the man also agreed to whatever his price was for him.
They set off almost at once, and Illinia walked with the others, getting to know them.
The armoured man was Torrigan, Paladin of Pelor, a young knight errant seeking to eradicate injustice in the world by going out and finding it. He was tall, dark-haired, and handsome; rather quiet, but very kind to Illinia.
The woman was Mira, a woman who stared enviously at Illinia for a while, before coming over and explaining that she had always wanted to be an elf. “I even worship the Elven god, Culann Nuthalion,” she explained, and Illinia nodded, having been told that in this world, there were several different pantheons of gods who co-existed. She herself continued to hold firm to Eru, although she thought she could detect him in the local god named Heironymous. She wasn’t sure, though.
Anyway, Mira was a cleric, a healer who also knew how to bash people in the head with her broadsword, and journeying for much the same reason as Torrigan, although with the added goal of meeting the elves who had raised her and then disappeared.
The bald bearded man was a former clown and circus performer, who had decided the life of a mercenary paid better. His name was Kellan Dunn, and he spent most of the trip telling jokes to the Halfling merchant, who thought most of them were pretty funny. Illinia didn’t understand a lot of them, but listened carefully, trying to figure out the human sense of humour.
They walked along the road all that day, passing the time by talking.
It was mid-afternoon when Kellan, looking ahead, waved his arm. “What’s that ahead?”
Illinia peered into the distance down the straight road, which was flanked by trees and bushes. “I… think it might be… are those called kobolds?” Her hawk rose from her shoulder into the sky, sending her pictures of the land.
“Kobolds are pretty common,” Torrigan informed her, loosening his sword in its sheath. “I wouldn’t be surprised.”
“Well, what are we waiting for?” Mira demanded, brandishing her own sword. “Let’s get them!”
“Let’s not go too far from the cart,” Illinia said, in her soft voice, and was actually rather surprised when the others looked at her and nodded. It was so unusual to have been heard, let alone listened to.
“Well,” Torrigan said thoughtfully as the enemy came closer, “those do appear to be kobolds, but not too many of them. Miss Illinia, perhaps you should begin to shoot them now. Miss Mira, let’s you and I move forward down the road to block them. Master Kellan, perhaps you could try to flank them?”
“All right!” Kellan called, jumping off the cart and vanishing into the bushes on the left of the road.
Illinia fired, but missed – they were still a little far for her, and the wind was blowing. Her next shot was gruesomely accurate.
There was a pained yell from the bushes on the left. “Kellan’s run into trouble,” Torrigan clipped out. “Mira, would you help him, please?” Illinia noted with a bit of a grin that their leader had forgotten all the careful, polite honorifics he had been handing out all day. She couldn’t say she minded, though. And he was still so polite! Was that from being a knight? she wondered as she fired off another arrow, this one catching a kobold in the leg, leaving it easy prey for the knight.
“Oh, gosh,” Mira cried from in the bushes. “You ran into a sword? That’s dumb!”
“All right, all right, I know!” Kellan called back. “Watch yourself!”
Torrigan looked over his shoulder, distracted, and so did Illinia.
“Sir Torrigan,” she said timidly. “I think I can handle the ones left on the road. Why don’t you go and help the others?”
“Thank you, Miss Illinia,” he said with a half bow, and dispatching one more kobold, plunged down the bank and crashed into the bushes.
She fired two more arrows, one each at the two left, but missed with both of them; they were moving too quickly. They were charging at her.
Her hawk dived and savaged the head of one of them. She braced herself, and thumped one in the head with the sword Valiensin had given her before they parted. The injured other was rushing directly at her, but missed where he was going and ran directly onto the sword, which she was admittedly using a little clumsily, but since she was still alive and her enemy was not, she wasn’t going to complain.
“Look out!” called the merchant from behind her, and Illinia felt a sear of pain flash across her side.
She cried out, spinning around in fear and pain, and the sharp edge of the sword caught the kobold in the face. It hissed and jerked back, hatred gleaming out of its small eyes.
Suddenly bold herself, she took a better grip on her sword and advanced on it.
A silver flash launched past her and cut the kobold in two.
“Are you all right?” Torrigan asked, already cleaning his sword. “Oh dear! Miss Mira, would you come help Miss Illinia?”
“Hey, Torrigan,” Mira said, as she hurried forward, her hands glowing with white light. “So I’ve been thinking. We’ve got at least another day of travelling together. It’s kind of a pain to say ‘miss’ all the time, isn’t it? Why don’t you stop?” Illinia gave a tiny nod of agreement, and winced as Mira touched her side, but it healed instantly, and so did her dress, which was a relief.
Torrigan thought seriously. “As long as you ladies are certain you don’t mind…”
“Oh, I don’t mind. In fact, I’d rather just be called Mira. Seriously. Please go ahead.”
“And you?” he asked, turning to Illinia.
She nodded again, not able to meet his eyes for shyness, shifting her weight. “I’d like that if you were to just call me by my name.” My travelling name, she thought to herself. When I find my husband, they can know my real name.
They journeyed the rest of the day without incident, and camped right on the road. Supper was frugal, but full of new camaraderie, which was new and exciting to Illinia.
Afterwards, they posted watches, and settled down for sleep, or in her case, meditation.
It was well into the night when Mira, who was on watch, woke them with a cry. “There are goblins in the trees!”
They all sprang into wakefulness and grabbed their weapons; Torrigan left his armour alone, because it would have taken far too long to put on.
Illinia had an advantage with her night-vision and her bow. Kellan charged ahead recklessly into the darkness, seeking out the goblins as best he might in the glow from the torches around their camp. Torrigan also had a bow, and he aimed and shot, but without a great deal of success. Mira waited impatiently, her sword and shield in hand, for the goblins to charge.
Her hawk, unwilling to fly in the dark, sat on her bedroll and shivered.
Illinia’s hands were shaking. She wondered why. Was it fear? It didn’t seem like it. She was with three other talented warriors. Then was it stage fright? That might be the answer. She fired, and missed. She took a deep breath and tried again; this shot was better, injuring her target.
Mira gave a cry of frustration. “Why won’t they come?” Too eager to get into the action, she flung down her sword and shield and drew her crossbow in the same motion, firing wildly into the trees. “Dangit!”
“Easy, Mira!” Torrigan said. “Watch them carefully!”
“No, watch me!” Kellan barked, and scrambled up the closest tree. Even Illinia stopped to watch him, as he stabbed the injured goblin, ran lightly along the branch, and leapt to the next tree, killing the first goblin he found there.
“My goodness,” Illinia murmured. “That was skilful.”
“Or lucky,” Mira grumbled. “Show-off.”
“Focus!” cried Torrigan, shooting an advancing goblin in the head.
Kellan fell out of the tree.
“What did I tell you?” Mira sighed, and ran to him to heal him with her magic.
Illinia couldn’t answer, but shot another goblin.
None of the goblins really got close to the cart, and after a short while, vanished into the night, squeaking in defeat.
The Halfling, who had been watching, applauded them. “That was quite the show! Thank you for your assistance! I don’t like to think what would have happened if you hadn’t been here.”
“Say no more,” Torrigan said graciously. “It was our duty.”
“Do we get a little extra for that?” Kellan asked, incorrigibly.
“No, you twit!” Mira scolded.
“Just asking…”
The merchant giggled, and went back to sleep.
The next day was very uneventful until evening drew near. The town that was their destination was also near, and as the sun set, they began to hear the howling of wolves. Illinia shivered, but tried to hide it from the others.
The howls grew louder as they got closer to town, until they suddenly ceased.
Now everyone shivered.
“Just get me to town, and then we’ll be all right,” the merchant said, looking around furtively.
“Of course we will,” Mira said, to reassure the protectors as much as the protected.
“What’s that?” Illinia said softly, pointing ahead.
They journeyed cautiously closer. As they saw what it was, Illinia gasped and the others flinched in shock. It was a werewolf, still clad in torn peasant clothing, chained with silver chains to a tree.
“Who is this, and what has happened to him?” Mira asked.
“I wouldn’t know!” said the merchant, slightly panicked. “Can we just go to town? You adventure types can come back later. But please get me to the town!”
“All right, but we should leave someone here to guard him,” Torrigan said reasonably.
“I’ll stay,” Illinia said.
“I’ll stay,” Mira echoed. “You boys go on ahead. We’ll be right here, making sure no one hurts the nice werewolf.” There was some sarcasm in her voice.
Illinia looked at her as the others left. “Why were you sarcastic? I don’t understand.”
“Well… he could be a bad werewolf, you know. Few werewolves are good. And he’s chained up.”
“Well…” Illinia considered. “Can a werewolf be cured?”
“Only in the first week, and you’d need some wolfsbane.”
“Oh! I know what that is.”
“Wait, it’s too dark to look for – oh, crap, you’re a full-blood elf. Wait! Come back!”
Illinia scurried around in the undergrowth, using her nose to help. “It’s odd… I can smell that it used to be here… but…”
She came across a patch of burnt earth. “It’s been burned, deliberately.”
“Ha!” Mira said. “A plot begins to appear!” She sat back on her heels. “But why do you want to help this guy?”
“Why not? He looks like he’s in pain…”
“What if he’s evil?”
“What if he’s not?”
Mira had nothing to say to that, and they went back to the wolf after having established that there was no wolfsbane in that area at all.
“So, Illinia! We should be best friends.”
“B-best friends?”
“Yeah! Like, we share secrets and stuff. Maybe you can teach me more about being an elf!”
“W-well… I don’t know what to say. What could I possibly teach you that you don’t already know?”
“Well… how to be more graceful, how to hear better, smell better, that kind of thing.”
Illinia laughed with some embarrassment. “I don’t know how to teach that… Anyway, I thought you were pretty graceful already!”
“And then I dump my weapons on the ground to get my other weapons. Yeah, right.”
“Ah… well…”
“But you’ll be my best friend, right?”
“Ah, yes, certainly! I would like that.”
“Have you had any best friends before?” asked Mira curiously.
“Well… my elder sister, and my husband… Not really a lot?”
“That’s too bad. Well, I’ll be your friend now… Oh, there are the guys.”
Torrigan and Kellan walked up to them. “We got paid,” Torrigan said, handing the women each a small purse. “Now, what is it you want to do?”
“I want to help him,” Illinia said after a short pause. “No one should be under such a terrible curse.”
“All right. Well, we should leave someone to guard him while we find a priest or healer of some kind.”
“Who should we leave?” asked Mira. “I was really counting on sleeping in an inn tonight.”
“I’ll stay,” Kellan said. Illinia peered at him suspiciously; he didn’t really seem to mean what he said. But the others appeared to believe him. “Look, I’ll sleep in this tree over here. That way, even if he gets loose, which doesn’t look likely, I’ll be safe. You guys go on ahead.”
“Thank you, Kellan,” Torrigan said, and led them to the town.
Illinia had no need of sleep like the two humans (of which Mira was rather jealous), and after a while in her room in the inn, she went downstairs to the tavern, to see what she could see.
She hadn’t been there thirty seconds when what she saw was Kellan, with his hood drawn well over his head, walk nonchalantly into the tavern and up to the bar.
She walked up to him, her stance indicating disapproval, and he turned tail and hurried out into the street. She followed after, and ran after him down the street. He attempted to hide in a dark alley, but her eyesight was much better than his. “Kellan, I thought you said you were going to watch him! Why are you here?”
Instead of answering, he ran down the street, shouting. “Help! Help! Save me from this elf!”
She followed him in mortified perplexity. “Kellan!”
Guards began to converge on them. “What is it you need, sir?”
“I need a healer! Quickly! It’s an emergency!”
“Oh, right away, sir. Follow me!” And Kellan went off with the guards, with a cheeky wink at Illinia.
She followed at a discreet distance, forgotten temporarily. She thought of going back to get Torrigan and Mira, but they needed their sleep and she might lose Kellan in the meantime. So she followed.
They brought him to the local priest’s house, where he banged on the door in great excitement. The priest hurried down, obviously having been wakened. “What is it? What’s the alarm?”
“Oh, you are so devoted!” Kellan fawned on him. “So good of you to be ready for anything, even at such a late hour of the night!”
“It is my duty to serve, sir,” said the priest, somewhat in a better mood. “What is your errand?”
“I need a healer. It’s about that werewolf…”
The priest gave him a look of scorn. “You think I don’t know about that werewolf? Trust me, we’ve done all we could for him. There’s nothing you can do; nothing I can do.” As the guards turned away, laughing to each other, he added in a lower voice that only Kellan – and Illinia – could hear: “Come see me at the temple in the morning.”
“Of course, sir,” Kellan said. “Thank you so much.”
The priest went back inside and shut his door.
The former entertainer turned back to Illinia with an air of triumph. “There, see? I was far more useful than the rest of you!”
“All right,” she said, uncertain how to respond. “Thank you, Kellan. But you really shouldn’t break your word. I’ll go watch over the werewolf now. Good night.”
She sat beside the werewolf all night, and on occasion tried to make him more comfortable. He was completely unconscious and did not move all night long. She wondered if the silver chains hurt him at all.
The others arrived early the next morning, having visited the priest in the temple. But as they arrived, the wolf changed back into a man. Illinia was not aware of the change happening, as it was so gradual. But she looked away from a wolf-man and looked back to a human, so he was changing.
The group talked in low tones as he stirred.
He blinked, sleepy and surprised, and raised a chained hand to cover a yawn. “Who are you?”
“We are…” Torrigan began, and paused. “Who are we?”
“We’re a group,” Mira said firmly. “We’re some travellers hanging together. Who are you?”
“I-I’m Derek. I… was a blacksmith in this town, and a member of the town patrol, but… a few nights ago, I… well, I don’t remember much. They say they found me unconscious on the edge of town… I don’t know. At some point, they discovered that sheep were going missing, and then that I was… the one… responsible…” Distress filled his simple, handsome face. “I don’t know what’s going on. But if I’m a danger to the town, then it’s only right that I be out here until I die.”
“No, that’s not right,” Illinia said softly. “How is it that all the wolfsbane has gone from here?”
“Yeah, how come no one’s tried to help you?”
“They did!” said Derek. “They did, very much. I don’t know anything about wolfsbane… but… well, this was all we could think to do. I’ll die soon, but since I won’t be curable in three days, that’s not much of a worry to me.”
“Three days!” Torrigan exclaimed. “All right, team, we have a deadline.”
“Wait, what?” asked the blacksmith. “Haven’t you heard what I said?”
“Loud and clear,” Mira told him. “Haven’t you heard what we said?”
“We haven’t actually said it,” Torrigan said.”
“We’re not going to just leave you here,” Illinia said softly, smiling a little, and placing a hand on his shackled arm. “You’ll see. We’ll help. We’re adventurers!”
“What are your names, sorry?”
“I’m Mira!” volunteered the lady in question. “I’m a cleric of Culann Nathalion! I’d like to be an elf… but Fate was unkind.”
“I’m Kellan,” said the former clown. “And that’s about all that’s interesting about me.”
“I’m Torrigan,” said their fearless leader. “Paladin of Pelor, righter of wrongs… the usual.”
“I-I’m Illinia,” said Illinia, shyly. And that was all.
“Oh, before I forget,” Torrigan said. “We all got silver weapons of some sort, and we bought you some silver arrows, Illinia. They might come in handy. Because while this man is probably innocent, there is still the wolf who attacked him, who may not be innocent.”
“Ah. Th-thank you…”
“Kellan?” asked the paladin, turning to their other member. “What’s on your mind?” Indeed, he had been very quiet.
Kellan, in lieu of answering, produced a pair of pants from the loose sleeve of his tunic.
Mira rolled her eyes. “Oh gosh. We’re trying to save a man’s life, and this guy’s worried about his modesty.”
“It’s a valid concern!” Kellan argued. “How about we unchain him?”
“We do have permission to do that,” Torrigan said, producing a key, and stood while Kellan breezed past him to pick the lock with an intricate set of picks.
“Soooo… lockpicks, eh?” Mira said suspiciously. “Any particular reason for those?”
“They’re useful?” Kellan said over his shoulder. “That’s about it.” He undid the chain, and Derek stood and stretched. Then he quickly accepted the pants from Kellan, turned around, shed the rags that had been covering him, and put on the fresh untorn pants.
“Well!” said the blacksmith, turning back to face them, looking better already. “Er. Thank you. You should probably hold onto that chain, since if I transform again, it’s your only hope of survival, probably. I don’t really know how much control I would have. I’ve always blacked out in wolf form up until now…”
“We’ll keep that in mind,” Mira said encouragingly. “Don’t worry, now. What would you like to eat?”
Derek’s face lit up, then fell again. “Well… I’ve been having a hankering for raw meat, which is not the best sign…”
“That’s all right,” said Illinia. “I can catch you some.”
“Yes, though we should head out immediately,” Torrigan said, checking the sun. “The day’s only just begun, but we’ve a long journey ahead of us before we reach our destination.”
“What’s that?” asked Derek.
“We’re in search of a sage who lived in the forest about six hours march south-east of here. So we had better get started!”
“Oh! Yes, indeed.”
“I-if you require it, my hawk can help,” Illinia said. “Forestfeather sends everything she sees to me. Perhaps she can help us locate this sage.”
“Excellent, thank you very much, Illinia,” Torrigan said, bowing to her. “As we get closer, we shall definitely call upon your assistance for that.”
She smiled at him.
“Is there any way I could see my friend Brett?” Derek said. “I know we have a long way to go, but I’d like to let him know what I’m up to. That I’m not shirking my punishment.”
“It’s not punishment,” Illinia murmured, but they didn’t seem to hear her this time.
“Certainly. We’ve talked to the priest, and he said that if you’re with us, the villagers will trust that we can keep you under control. Where’s your friend?”
“Well, he’s a guardsman, and he should be patrolling around the eastern edge of town at this time of day.”
“Lead on, sir.”
Derek’s friend was cautiously happy to see them; he spoke with a broad accent (Australian, for us modern-day humans) that Kellan could not understand. It was very amusing, seeing Torrigan try to translate between two different modes of their shared language.
They were just saying goodbye to Derek’s friend (who had even managed to tell them something new – that Derek had been found in an area where the night lamps were not working, his armour and clothing torn) when there was a hail from the other direction. “Halt! What are you doing?”
“Er…” began Torrigan.
“Lord Councillor!” Derek stammered.
“Well? Answer me!”
“This guy, Derek, he’s allowed to be with us,” Mira said. “We’re professional adventurers. We can handle him if he changes. Really.”
The councillor looked at them suspiciously. “You don’t look very competent to me. A goody-two-shoes paladin, a naive cleric, a shifty looking man, and an elf…”
“Hey, Illinia’s all right!” Mira said. “I dunno about Kellan, but…”
“Heyyyy…”
“I’m kidding, Kellan. You’re all right, too.”
“My friends,” Torrigan said soothingly. “Less banter, perhaps? My lord, please be assured we are fully prepared to help this man and to defend the innocent, or die trying.”
“Er…” Kellan said. Illinia nudged him and nodded, her eyes bright with agreement. He sighed and crossed his arms.
“So I suppose you are going to visit the sage. Well, that’s all right. At least you will be out of the town.”
“We most certainly will be, sir,” Derek said; a set in his shoulders told Illinia he was hiding anger.
“Well, be careful. There have been several disappearances the last few nights, and not limited to sheep, either.” The councillor turned and swept away, his attendants around him.
Derek looked at the others and shrugged. “And he’s the father of my sweetheart… He really doesn’t like me.”
“Oh, that’s too bad,” Illinia murmured.
“It’s all right,” he said to her. “She understands. But sometimes I think he was glad I became a wolf. Although… I am a very good blacksmith. My going would leave a hole in the town… my apprentice isn’t good enough to take over yet.”
Kellan nodded. “Could I be your apprentice?”
Derek laughed. “I think we can talk about that later.”
They set out and journeyed for many hours. Illinia’s hawk managed to catch a squirrel on the way, which she gave to Derek. He went behind a tree to eat, shamefaced, but he seemed to be feeling better when he was done. Mira offered him a piece of bread, which he also ate.
“It’s funny; apparently I’ve been eating sheep,” he said. “I had been wondering why my mouth tasted like wool when I woke up in the mornings.” Illinia, although she felt so sorry for him, couldn’t help but giggle a little at the way he said it.
Her hawk chose that moment to come dive-bombing onto her shoulder; Illinia staggered with the sudden impact. “What’s the matter, Forestfeather?”
The hawk stared wildly into her eyes. “Oh! There is… smoke, rising to the… east.”
“Is it the sage?” asked Kellan.
“I can’t tell,” she said, releasing the connection and shaking her head to clear it of the sudden weariness. “It’s not a camping fire; something big is on fire.”
“We must investigate!” cried Mira, striking a dramatic pose.
“Yes, of course,” Torrigan said. “Is that all right with you, Derek? It might be the sage we’re looking for.”
Derek nodded. “Fire is dangerous. You have every right to deal with that first.”
They walked rather faster in the direction Illinia’s hawk indicated. They hadn’t gone fifty metres when there was a venomous hiss and a massive black spider lunged at them from under a bush.
Illinia screamed as they all dodged in various directions; this spider was even bigger than the ones she had fought in Mirkwood, and looked faster and more vicious, too. Kellan, too, yelped.
Torrigan and Mira were to the fore, weapons at the ready, with the shaken Illinia behind them, and Kellan on the flank. Derek hung back, weaponless, nervous.
The spider attacked with claws and fang; Torrigan grunted as he struggled to block. Mira took advantage of the assault on Torrigan to bash one of its legs; Kellan cartwheeled around to the other side of it and attacked it with his rapier from the back.
Derek seemed to be having trouble; he fingered his throat nervously, blinking, sweating. Illinia cast him a worried glance as she loosed another arrow, striking somewhere near the creature’s head.
Derek let out a howl and dropped to all fours, dark brown fur bursting out all over his body. (Fortunately, this pair of pants did not tear.) He growled fiercely over the others cries and exclamations of “oh crap!” and charged forward, past Torrigan and Mira, and slammed the spider’s head into the dirt, where it scrabbled uselessly.
“Oh! Quick, get it!” Kellan called, redoubling his attack. “Kill it! Kill it!”
Derek barked as one of the spider’s fangs nipped his bare foot. Then Mira’s sword clove its head from its body, and it collapses in a pile of flailing legs. Kellan ducked, but was nicked by one anyway, tearing a deep gash in his shoulder.
“Oh no,” Mira said, investigating Derek’s foot. The wolf-man stood quietly, breathing heavily, but otherwise unmoving.
“Derek?” Illinia said cautiously, moving up into his field of vision. “You’re in control, and not asleep?”
He turned to look at her and gave her a big toothy grin.
“It’s probably because… Derek, did you transform out of choice?” Torrigan asked. The wolf nodded, and stiffened as Mira prodded his wound.
“That explains it,” Kellan said. “Hey, if we can’t cure him, can we take him with us? He’s pretty good in a fight.”
“That would be up to him, but first we are going to do our best to cure him,” Torrigan said sternly.
“Of course,” Kellan said, but sighed afterwards.
“Oh, drat,” Mira said from where she crouched on the ground. “It’s poison time. Where’s that spider antidote?” She sang a little song to herself as she hunted through her pack, mostly consisting of the words “it’s poison time, poison time, poison time…” that made Illinia laugh in anxious bemusement.
“All right,” she said. “Derek, please drink this. It’ll taste awful, but you won’t die.”
He took the vial and gulped it down, licking his lips with his long tongue afterwards. He coughed a bit, but the wound began to heal.
“That should do it!” Mira said. “All right, gang, let’s continue!”
Torrigan nodded. “Which way, Illinia?”
She consulted her hawk.
They took another half hour to reach the fire. When they got there, they halted in shock.
There was a lovely little hut, burning to the ground. It had only just been set on fire in the last hour. Outside, a dead wolf lay sprawled on the ground, covered in multiple blade wounds and arrows.
Kellan, without a backwards look, dove into the hut.
“Hey! That’s not safe!” Mira called; as if to punctuate her point, part of the flaming roof broke off and tumbled to the ground.
Illinia knelt beside the dead wolf. “This was the companion to someone…” She couldn’t say how she knew; she just knew.
“Is this the sage’s hut?” Torrigan asked.
Kellan came stumbling back out of the house, a few things in his hands. “Was the sage’s name George? Because these things belong to George.”
He had a journal, a couple magic books, and two potions.
“Well, yes,” said Derek, now transformed back into a human. “Oh, dear. That was his wolf companion. What happened to him?”
Illinia looked up. “Orcs and goblins. I can smell it.”
“You have a keen nose, then,” Torrigan said. “I smell nothing besides fire.”
“I think it’s an elvish thing,” she said. “Let me see…” Her hawk rose into the air, and she tested the wind in all directions. “We can follow them. The sage isn’t here, right? There’s no body? Perhaps we can still save him.”
“Man, and I bet we have to save someone else in order to save him,” Kellan said. “Wheels within wheels. What a pain.”
“Come on, Kellan, keep up!” Mira called, following the slender disappearing form of Illinia. There was no real possibility of Illinia disappearing into the forest in her red dress, although she had the black velvet cloak in her pack still, and she had discovered a bit of an ability to create an illusion that made it look like she wasn’t there. It wasn’t true invisibility, because she could only make it look like she was another part of the landscape, a tree, for instance. But it might be useful when she was all alone without friends to watch over her.
They followed the orc-trail for a couple hours, not stopping this time for food, although they ate on the move. Derek could only eat a small piece of bread this time, and Mira frowned anxiously at him.
At last, they reached a wide clearing in the forest; beyond it was an encampment made of rickety wooden boards haphazardly hammered together to create a circular barricade.
Illinia’s hawk came down to share with her what it had seen.
“There is… a cage inside the encampment?” she said slowly. “No, more than one cage. And there are towers with archers in them. They are not alert, though.”
“We can take them by surprise!” Kellan said, rather louder than he had to. The others shushed him.
“Well,” Torrigan said. “Let’s start by shooting them. Illinia, would you take point? Mira and I will come behind you.”
“Man, all I have is this stupid crossbow,” Mira grumbled. “It’s inaccurate and completely un-elf-like. Someday I really want a longbow like you, Illinia.”
Illinia blushed and nocked an arrow.
Even she was not so accurate at the distance she was shooting at, but the goblins in the towers didn’t seem to notice her. She shook her head. Her next arrow hit, and they still didn’t react.
Her eyebrows quirked in confusion. They were under attack, and they still didn’t realize it! What was wrong with them?
Torrigan and Mira’s arrows joined the fray, and then they began to notice something was up.
“All right,” Torrigan said. “I think they’ll probably open the gates and charge us. While we keep them occupied, Kellan and Illinia should sneak inside and try to rescue the sage. I bet he’s in one of the cages.”
“Sure,” Kellan said, moving to the side. “Come on, Illi.”
“Illi?” she said to herself. It sounded so strange coming from Kellan, and kind of forced.
The gate swung open jerkily, and six big orcs rushed out and down the hill towards them.
“Uh oh,” Torrigan said, switching his longbow for his sword. Mira took a bit of time to shoot one more arrow, and hit an orc square in the chest, dropping him immediately as the powerful little bolt punched through his armour.
“Ha!” she cried. “Finally, a hit with my ranged weapon!”
Then the orcs were upon them. “Oh, drat,” she said, simply dropping her crossbow and grabbing at her sword.
Illinia and Kellan were already behind the orcs, fighting the goblins who swarmed out of the towers. Illinia gripped Valiensin’s sword tightly, her heart pounding rather uncomfortably in her chest. A roar from behind them told her that Derek had transformed again.
They burst into the camp, the goblins not slowing them down at all. There were two cages; one held a young girl, perhaps fourteen, and the other held a middle-aged man.
Illinia and Kellan had to deal with the goblins before they could do anything, but Kellan, while Illinia was holding their attention, ran over to the sage’s cage and cut it open.
The sage rose and walked swiftly to a staff leaning against the opposite wall. He picked it up, held out his hand, and the goblins convulsed and collapsed. Illinia shuddered and jumped back with a squeak – the ground was also convulsing! The roots of plants coiled around the hapless creatures and dragged them under the ground into large cracks that closed over them.
The young elf stood there, shivering, and then became aware of a greater need than hers. The sage was weeping, softly at first, but then big racking sobs tore through him.
She understood. Somehow, without words, she understood. The wolf had been his life’s companion, and now that it was gone, he was without his dearest friend, one who had been to him like a child. She slowly went to him, supporting him as he crouched sobbing on the ground.
The group that had been fighting the orcs entered the gate. “Oh dear,” Mira said, surveying the damage.
Derek was cleaning blood from his claws when he caught sight of the girl in the cage, and then gave a hoarse bark.
Kellan released the girl, and the werewolf rushed to her side. She cowered away with a shriek. “Aaaah! Who are you? Don’t hurt me, please! Please please please don’t hurt me! Stay away!”
“It’s all right,” Torrigan said. “Don’t be afraid, miss. This is our friend Derek. We are working to free him from his curse.”
“Oh!” she cried out in fear again, though. “That’s Derek? Derek, dear, what happened to you?”
Will a huge effort of will, the blacksmith transformed back into a human. “It’s all right, Fiona. It’s all right. They’re going to cure me. Now, what are you doing here? You disappeared! I was out of my mind with worry! And then I found out that I was the werewolf, and they locked me up, which was of course the right thing to do… for all I knew, I was the one who made you disappear!”
She shook her head, and crept out of the cage. “No, silly brother.” Her forehead wrinkled up. “Well, actually, I don’t know what happened. I promise I didn’t go out at night! I stayed near Auntie all day! It’s like I just fell into a pool of dark water in my head… and when I woke up, I was here! I was terrified!”
“I can imagine,” said her brother, who cautiously went to her and picked her up. “I’m not going to hurt you, Fiona, honestly I’m not. These people are all good fighters, though. They’ll stop me if I lose control.”
She peered around at all of them. “Oh wow. You all look so scary!” She pointed at Illinia, still crouched over the grieving sage. “Except for you.”
Mira gave a rueful laugh. “Even me?”
“Well…”
“Even me?” asked Kellan, leaning with a somewhat deranged grin. Derek swung his sister away from the ex-clown, muttering “not funny”.
She nodded, shrinking away.
“Kellan, please,” Torrigan said. “Miss Fiona, in a moment, we shall escort you back to town. But first we must talk to this man.”
The sage was recovering after his outpouring of grief, and was getting up, more composed. “What can I do for you, sir knight?”
“We were told you might be able to help us with this man. Er, man infected by a werewolf.”
The sage moved over and inspected Derek by sweeping his staff over him. “He’s pretty far gone. You have only two days after today to cure him.”
“We know. But what is the cure?”
“Have you tried wolfsbane?”
“There isn’t any near the town.”
The sage frowned. “What? That is ominous… I wonder who or what could have removed it?”
“Not a werewolf, I suppose,” said Kellan. “The werewolf that bit Derek. Because then wouldn’t he have problems with it?”
“It was burned,” Illinia said. “He or she could have burned it from a distance…”
“True,” the sage said. “Well, that makes your job a little more difficult, for all my wolfsbane was also burned… But fortunately I do know someone who can help you. You must seek out Aleic the Wise, who lives in the mountains north of the village. He will have wolfsbane. He is much more powerful than I, so he will not have been defeated by a paltry bundle of orcs and goblins.”
Mira had been poking around the camp, and came up to Torrigan. “Hey… look at this. Does this look suspicious or what?”
“That certainly does look odd,” Torrigan answered, taking the papers from her. “It’s a letter requesting that these orcs kidnap… well, the two of you. It’s signed with a strange symbol… It looks kind of like an M and a T overlapping inside a circle with a five pointed star.”
“I didn’t know orcs knew how to read,” Kellan said.
“I’m not sure they would have to,” Mira said. “This doesn’t seem like it was for their benefit. Yeah, it’s not addressed to them… It’s a status report to some guy… Lord… Tofu? He’s in Thaxted, the city to the north, anyway.”
“Er…” Torrigan deadpanned, attempting to figure out the scrawl. “I can’t read that either.”
“Well, we’ll figure that out later,” Mira said, stuffing it carefully into her bag of Holding. “For now, let’s get the girl back to town and then go see this Aleic person!”
“Agreed,” Torrigan said. “Kellan? Illinia?” They nodded. Torrigan turned to the sage. “Will you be accompanying us, sir?”
The sage nodded. “I will take stock of my situation in a safer place. Let us go quickly, before more evil things come.”
They left and walked back to town. Night was falling when they drew closer.
“I should stay away,” Derek said as the sun was slipping over the edge. “In fact, you should probably chain me up again right now.”
“Ah! Yes, that would make sense,” Mira said. “If you feel you’re in control, though, just let me know and I’ll let you loose again. No problem.” She fished the silver chain out and shackled Derek’s hands together.
“What’s going on?” Fiona asked worriedly. “Why are you chaining my big brother?”
“It’s all right,” Illinia said. “He’s just worried that as he’s under a curse, he might hurt us by accident. He’s protecting us.”
Fiona pouted. “Well… all right. But don’t you hurt my brother!”
“No fear,” Kellan said.
“Your brother is a wonderful person and a formidable fighter. We won’t hurt him,” Torrigan assured her. “Now, how about Illinia and I take you home? Will you tell us where you live?”
She nodded. “Follow me! I can lead the way from here.”
Illinia stooped and picked up the little girl, who clung to her neck. “I will carry you, sweet child. It’s been a long day, and I’d like to keep you close.”
The four – Illinia, Torrigan, Fiona, and the sage – trooped down the hill and into the town. They heard a distant growl behind them, but it was surprisingly unthreatening.
“That would be Derek, I suppose,” Torrigan said. “He doesn’t sound too alarmed. Or alarming.”
“That’s good,” Illinia said.
They walked down to the town, bid farewell to the sage at the temple, and returned the child to her home. Then they went back into the forest to camp with the other three. Derek was quiet; he did not fall unconscious like he had for whatever reason on the night they had found him, nor did he seem inclined to attack them. After a while, Mira unchained him. He bared his teeth when she first approached him, but it seemed that he was in control of himself. They still posted a watch. After a while, Derek curled up and went to sleep.

November 8, 2011

I Know You’re Out There Somewhere: NaNoWriMo 2011 – chapter 3

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Filed under: I Know You're Out There Somewhere — Tags: , — Illinia @ 5:18 pm

More Tharash! There are some italics in this chapter which I have not added yet. Will deal with that later.

 

Chapter 3

Illinia turned this way and that, trying to see all the people talking. “Valiensin!”
The tall elf paddled after her through the rift, grinning. “Sorry, lassie, my own conscience just couldn’t let you run off into the unknown like that. I’ll see you to land.”
Valiensin?” said the strange man on the raft. “What kind of fool name is Valiensin, Flairé?”
Valiensin gave the man an unimpressed look. “It’s my name in that world, Tharash. Why don’t you introduce yourself to the young lady, now.”
The wizard flicked a hand dismissively. “For all you know, she’s one of the ones messing with my rifts!”
Valiensin snorted. “Are you kidding me? She is totally not, and you’re the one leaving your rifts open all over the place. That’s how I keep getting around, you know.”
Tharash grimaced. “I leave them open on purpose for you, silly elf. I’m afraid you shan’t be getting back to the Adhemlenei by this one. This isn’t the one you came through.”
Valiensin’s eyebrows shot up towards his hairline, and Illinia felt obliged to intervene.
“E-excuse me, s-sir…” she began. “I-I’ve never messed with any rifts. Valiensin is the name he gave me… I’m from Taur-nu-Fuin, in Middle Earth. I don’t know anything about rifts. I’m just looking for my husband… Mithlas. Have you seen him? He is tall, with long golden hair…”
The wizard shook his head. “I haven’t seen anyone of that description. But if I do, I’ll see if I can rift him to where you are, yes?”
“So you’ll let up on her, then?”
Tharash nodded carelessly. “Naturally. She’s all right. And tell, me, Miss Illinia, if you come across any dark-clothed men meddling with my rifts… throw a couple spells their way for me, would you?”
“S-spells? What do you mean?”
“You know… like… magic?”
She shook her head in confusion. “I have no magic… Valiensin has some illusions, but that is not the same…”
Tharash sighed. “You’re heading to Elberron and you don’t have any magic? I can feel you have magic! Look, hang on just a minute and let me deal with this rift.”
“Take your time,” Valiensin said, putting his hands behind his head casually. “Illinia, you’re going to have to put up with both of us for a little while. You’re going to need it!”
She covered her face with her hands. “I-I’m so sorry. I thought I was competent… I travelled from Taur-nu-Fuin to Minas Tirith without running into too much trouble…”
He shook his head. “I’m afraid you were probably lucky. Also, this world operates on slightly different rules, which you’d best learn with our help. Ooh, watch what he’s doing! This is always cool.”
“C-cool…?”
It was certainly nothing to do with temperature, whatever he meant. Tharash was making quick gestures with his hands, and the air was swirling like boiling water. The opening to the world of Middle Earth was closing, like the mouth of a bag being closed with drawstrings. It closed slower and slower, but at last the last flakes of reality snapped into place and there was nothing to be seen but the same sky; no sign of the tropical blue of the other world.
Illinia’s mouth hung open. “What- what happened? How do you do that?”
“Simple, my dear,” said the wizard-mage, turning to her with a flourish. “I am a Wayrifter.” And the hem of his cloak hit him in the face.
Valiensin chuckled. “Look, Tharash kiddo, why don’t you come over to my boat? It’s a lot more stable than that raft of yours, and faster, too.”
“What do you have against my raft?” Tharash sniffed.
Valiensin shrugged. “Oh, nothing, just that it looks like you grabbed it out of some random rift. Probably from some random trees that aren’t really suited for turning into a raft. And I’m sure you only called it after you stepped through this oversized rift and fell in the ocean. And-“
“All right, enough! I’ll come over.”
“He doesn’t like getting criticized in front of pretty girls,” Valiensin whispered conspiratorially to Illinia, who blushed deeply. “There’s nothing really wrong with his raft. I’m just teasing him.” He turned to Tharash. “Right, Thar?”
Tharash rolled his eyes, settling himself in Valiensin’s boat. “As long as I get to tease you back, Flairé, we’ll be all right. Now, where to?”
“Elberron?”
“Yes, but where in Elberron?”
“E-excuse me…” Illinia chirped up. “What is Elberron?”
“Ah…”
“We’d better start at the beginning,” Valiensin said. “You’ve been here more than I have. Why don’t you fill her in?”
“All right,” said Tharash, pushing back his odd hat before it could get knocked off by Valiensin’s sail. “Where to begin?”
“Wh-what is Elberron? Is it a continent?”
“That’s exactly what it is. It’s inhabited by many different creatures. Some of them are good! Most of them are bad.”
“From your point of view,” Valiensin put in. “I’d say the balance is about equal.”
Tharash glared. “Who’s telling this?”
“Go on, then!”
The mage continued. “Most of the sentient creatures live in settlements of some kind, although there is very little central organization. It’s fascinating to study them – did you know that Gnomes all worship music?”
“What are Gnomes?” Illinia asked innocently.
Tharash facepalmed.
“Go slowly, Tharash!” Valiensin chided. “Don’t facepalm until she asks what the moon is.”
“I know what that is,” Illinia said, just as innocently. “Ithil, Rana the Wanderer, Tilion. We sing songs to him all the time!”
“You sing songs to the moon?” Tharash asked eagerly. “Now tell me, do you worship it? Why do you call it a ‘him’? How many names do you have-“
Valiensin rolled his eyes and mouthed something at her.
“Ah-!” Illinia flailed verbally. “M-may I tell you about that when I am not trying to follow you physically and mentally?”
Tharash settled back. “Ah, yes, of course. Now… about magic. Pretty sure you have some! You practically smell like it. You just need training.”
She looked confused. “In Middle Earth, we don’t have… magic. Perhaps we are more spiritually connected, more ethereally inclined than other races, but we cannot use magic as they think we can… We can have or cause visions… we can invite the plants to grow and the rains to come… The greatest among us can do marvellous things, but they are not… for instance… fireballs.” She frowned. “We do have a wonderful skill of camouflage, in general, and one thing the Noldor did was to create many magic rings… Those are certainly magic. It’s said that some can cause invisibility! But most have a spiritual effect rather than a visual effect.”
“Fascinating,” Tharash murmured to himself. When she looked up, he was scribbling in a book. Valiensin poked him. “Oh, ah, what? Ah, yes, here we have a bit more of that… non-spiritual magic. Perhaps your abilities will be more nature-inclined, but I’m willing to bet my hat that you have powers you never even dreamed of. And I’ll teach you how to use them!”
“And I’ll teach you not to stare wide-eyed into danger!” Valiensin offered.
“Why should I not?” Illinia offered. “It’s one way to disarm it.”
Valiensin’s mouth fell open at this candid admission, and then he threw back his head and laughed. Tharash just looked confused.
“But – but I am also very shy!” she tried to amend her statement, to stop Valiensin from laughing at her.
He shook his head, still chuckling. “You are rather perceptive! But do you charm the spiders in your forest that way? Because you will meet some creatures that are intelligent but who don’t care two leaves for your sweet innocent adorable naivety. It’s true! So I’ll help you out that way.”
She bowed her head. “You are both so kind to me.”
“Don’t mention it,” Valiensin said reflexively.
“It’s his fault,” Tharash said, pointing at Valiensin, who poked him back. It turned into a shoving match between the two men, which ended with Tharash pulled a rolled up newspaper from a quick rift and smacked Valiensin in the head with it. The elf practically split his sides laughing, but Illinia noted that his course was straight as an arrow and did her best to follow.

And so, she came to the land of Elberron, and Valiensin helped her grow in martial artistry in ways she had never known, and Tharash unlocked in her the secret of magic. But only after he himself figured out how it worked in this world, which seemed to involve a lot of explosions, and once Valiensin was transformed into the cutest little black bunny Illinia had ever seen. By accident. They wandered aimlessly through the land at first, although Tharash frequently left through rifts. But he always came back to his eager pupil.
He taught her to control the motions of plants; taught her to conjure water; taught her simple healing spells – the new possibilities of that world made Illinia’s head spin. Valiensin honed her knife skills, and even taught her some basics with a sword. He said her knife would not be enough protection against some things that would prey upon her.
And indeed, one night Valiensin and Illinia were attacked by a small band of goblins. Valiensin was on his feet in a moment, sword drawn and keen and unhesitating in the dark.
Illinia, though her eyesight was even better than Valiensin’s in the dark, tried to defend herself with her knife – but the goblins were using lances. She would have been soon slain if Valiensin had not defended her for enough time to draw her sword.
When the battle was over, she was shaking with adrenaline, fear, and exhaustion – the sword was much heavier than the knife, although it was still elven-light. It was also harder for her to use. The goblins had not been very fierce, but they had been too many for her on her own.
Valiensin patted her on the head, then pulled her close and held her until she stopped shaking.
And then she heard a tiny whimpering sound. What could it be? She went looking for it. Valiensin had heard it too, and followed her curiously.
It was an adult hawk, its wing torn by a goblin’s arrow. It fluttered uselessly as she bent over it, making weak hissing sounds.
“Shhh, shhh,” she soothed. “I won’t hurt you. Come with me…”
It snapped at her with its sharp beak, and she drew back. “It’s all right! I want to help you. Let me see your wounds.”
Exhausted, the hawk collapsed, no longer caring what she did, and she lifted it gently and took it back to the camp.
“What’s that?” Valiensin asked. “A hawk? A good choice for a pet…”
“A pet? A hawk is not a pet… If a hawk travels with a person as a companion…”
“Well, same thing, yes?”
“If I used your words, I would be your pet!”
“Aren’t you?” His face was grave, but his eyes were twinkling, and Illinia couldn’t help but giggle.
The hawk was healed by her new magic, and flopped around a little, testing its wing.
Then it turned to her and looked so intelligently at her, but in a way that made it very clear it was asking for something, asking with the innocence of a small child.
“Oh, you are hungry?” she asked.
“Ha!” Valiensin laughed from the other side of the fire. “I see this one has its ways. Good for you!”
“What is your name?” she asked as it pecked at the remains of the turkey they had eaten for dinner.
It raised its head and looked at her. Her eyes shone as she gazed back at it, and in her mind, she could feel some change happening. There was a connection being formed. Half-frightened, half-wondering, she waited.
The hawk did not speak with words, but although she had always had an affinity for creatures, she suddenly felt she could understand everything the hawk wished to say to her. If she wished to see with its eyes, if she wished to request something from it, if it wished to request something of her, there was only the touch of a mind, and the request would be granted. It was like speaking without sound, without motion. It was like unheard music.
“I shall call you Forestfeather,” she said to it, and it ruffled its feathers and refolded its wings. It climbed up her dress sleeve to her shoulder, where it promptly went to sleep.
“Aww, you made a friend!” Valiensin cooed. She mock-glared at him, and then almost giggled, because glaring was not in her usual repertoire. She settled down to meditate, hawk on shoulder.
She hadn’t heard anything of her husband yet… and it was discouraging. None of the people in the little towns (who had looked at her and Valiensin with fear and awe – apparently elves simply didn’t grow as tall as he was in this land! Some of them asked if he was half-troll, to which he would double up laughing.) had seen a golden-haired elf.
That elf…
They had met several times at dances after that first meeting, and each time he danced with her. She enjoyed it very much, but as soon as he tried to talk to her, she would flee to her sister. But she noticed that he would try to talk to people about her, and she couldn’t do anything about that.
It was midsummer, and the moon was rising. She was seated in the higher branches of the tree that was her home, watching its silvery light fall on the leaves of the forest. In other trees in the whole area around her, other elves were hidden, watchful.
She listened to the wind, its warm harmonies audible only to her ears and the ears of the other elves, and opened her mouth and sang.
Alone in her tree, her timidity fell from her, and music poured from her throat, echoing among the trees and drifting up to the stars and the round silver moon. The voices of the others rose beside her, lifting her above the mortal plane and into transcendent realms of serene bliss. It filled her senses until she thought she could bear no more…
The next day she had been walking home from the palace, along the deserted path, when she saw him standing by the way.
“I heard you last night,” he said. “You were the caller, yes?”
She flushed.
“It was beautiful. I am greatly in awe of your voice. …Would you stay and talk a while?”
“Ah…” she turned and ran.
“I suppose that would be no, then.”
And he was there the day after! This time he made no attempt to talk, but stepped towards her. Again, she fled. The day after, the same, but she was growing a little more accustomed to his presence.
After a week of this, she was finally bold enough to flirt back with him.
Now when he stepped towards her, she stayed and waited a little. But when he tried to embrace her, again she fled.
Now this was a new variation on a theme – when he came towards her, she would wait a little longer each time, until her nerve for teasing gave out and she must vanish or die.
Then the day came when his arms gently closed around her. She looked up into his eyes from under her eyelashes, her palms against his chest – and again, she slipped away and ran.
“Ha!” with a shout, he was after her. He had not done this before! But she led him a merry chase, across log and dell, through ancient trees and young ones, galloping and half-flying along her way, and he after.
She lost track of time and place and reason, just delighting fully and with her entire body and soul in the joy of speed and wind and exertion.
Then – he was there ahead of her! He had judged her path and taken a shortcut! She was too slow to stop herself and careened into his arms. He stood firm as she plowed into him, and as she laughed breathlessly, held her more and more tightly, as if clasping a precious treasure that could not be let go or else it would disappear – which was perhaps close enough to the truth.
And he bent his shining head and kissed her full on the mouth, and Esgalwen was caught in the moment – the sun warming the clearing around them, embracing them both in light and warmth… she drifted away, aware of nothing more than his mouth pressing against hers, the sounds of his breath and the way his body shifted against hers, the almost inaudible murmurs he made as he shifted…
She was floating in a dream, where time did not exist, where nothing but love and longing and the most intense adoration lived…
Their lips parted, and she looked up at him so adoringly – and then her smile turned mischievous, and again she slipped from his arms! But this time he was ready for her, and captured her hand in his, and they ran through the forest together, rejoicing together in their strength and skill and speed.

November 6, 2011

I Know You’re Out There Somewhere: NaNoWriMo2011, chapter 2

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Filed under: I Know You're Out There Somewhere — Tags: , — Illinia @ 10:30 pm

LONG CHAPTER IS LONG

It’s like 15 pages long. You have been warned. But there are two cameos in it. One of them doesn’t shut up. The other may or may not be accurate.

Working on Chapter 5 at the moment… Almost done the first quest. Then on to the second quest. There are three quests in all. I wish my fingers would know the words I want to put down super-fast so I can get through the stuff that I know for certain. I keep wishing this. Going to try to get to 25,000 words tonight… If I do write super-fast, how many can I get?

There will be some Eros and Psyche up tomorrow, so check again then! : D

 

 

Chapter 2

The small elf-maid opened her brown eyes wide, but made no move otherwise.
She was lying on her back on something that felt soft, soft and cushiony and even velvety. A warm flickering of firelight played on verdant green branches above her. The thing that made her open her eyes, though, was the smell of something incredibly tasty – or at least edible.
“Hee, you’re awake!” said a feathery tenor voice nearby, and someone leaned into her field of view. Esgalwen lay paralyzed, with both fear and apprehension and shyness, for the person was unlike anyone she’d ever seen, as the creatures were unlike any dogs she’d ever seen.
He was taller than anyone she’d ever seen before, and skinny, almost stretched-looking. His hair was black and shining like her own, and straight as her own, although a little shorter. His skin was only a little less pale than hers, but his eyes were a brilliant emerald green. His mouth was wide and smiling in a very friendly way. He was very clearly a strange, foreign kind of elf.
“Come on, now, don’t just lie there!” he held out a hand, and gently but inexorably, drew Esgalwen into a sitting postion. “Poor lassie, your stomach was grumbling even while you were passed out.”
Esgalwen flushed the same colour as her dress, and he laughed. It was a warm, cheerful laugh, and Esgalwen found herself relaxing a little.
“Oh, don’t look like that. Here, eat this. You’re little more than skin and bones!”
She took the bowl and spoon, and began to eat the broth.
“Where are you from, lassie?”
She swallowed, ducking her head. “I-I’m from M-Mirkwood… Taur-nu-fuin…”
“Oh? I haven’t heard of it… Where’s that? In direction.”
“I-it’s to the northeast, many days sail and then you are in Middle-Earth, and then you go up the River Anduin… Th-they call it Greenwood the Great again, now.”
“Oh… I… think… I’ve heard of it? I think I met a few travellers who are from… Middle Earth, yes? I’ve never been. But maybe I should visit. I’m from the Land of the Moon, which is waaaay far to the west, so far west it’s almost east again.”
Esgalwen’s eyes grew large again. “Is such a thing possible?”
“Oh, yes, it is. My mother has been around the entire world. So… my name is Valiensin. What’s yours, lassie?”
“I…I-I’m called Esgalwen.”
“How pretty! What does it mean?”
Esgalwen took another swallow of soup, wondering if the strange elf ever stopped talking, and then hoping that he wouldn’t because he was making her feel much more comfortable than she’d felt in months. “It means The Hidden Maiden, in Westron… It’s a Sindarin name…”
“Huh. Westron, you call this language? We called it… well, language. We have our own language, but I doubt you speak it.”
“Y-yes.”
He didn’t say anything for a while, rocking his head back and forth and humming to himself.
“So, Miss Esgalwen, what brings you half-dead to the middle of the Lesser Ocean?”
“The what?”
“The middle of the Lesser Ocean. You know, this great expanse of water.”
“Oh… um… I meant… there is a Greater Ocean?”
“Oh, yes. You get there just by heading west, until you reach land…”
“Not Valinor?”
“I’ve heard that name! There seem to be a lot of people looking for it.”
Esgalwen’s heart clenched in her chest. “Was one of them tall – well, not as tall as you – and with long beautiful golden hair, and piercing sweet pale blue eyes?”
“There were a few… what’s his name? Is he your sweetheart?”
“He’s my husband,” she whispered, clutching the bowl in her hands. “His name… Well, here is what he looks like.” She put the bowl down hurriedly, reached to the neckline of her dress, and drew out a small golden locket. Inside was a tiny portrait of him and herself, standing together, newly married. She smiled inadvertently at it, although abruptly her vision was drowned in tears.
Valiensin gently took it from her trembling fingers and peered at it. “Yes. I actually gave him a new name, because he and his friend were fleeing from… well, unsavoury people. So as you travel, make sure to ask for Mith’las, okay? It’s Sindarin, like your own name, but it’s pretty universally elvish sounding, so he’ll be safe from his pursuers, and you’ll be able to find him easily enough.”
“H-how long ago did you see him? Where was he? How was he? Did he speak of me?” The questions poured out of her, and she reached up to Valiensin’s shoulder towering beside her for support.
He responded by putting a friendly arm around her and supporting her shaking body. “He’s fine. I saw him two years ago, as I was passing through Elberron. I’ll tell you how to get there! Anyway, he was quite healthy, and though stressed, he was in beautiful physical condition. It was a pleasure to travel with him for a short while. He did mention his wife, and that he had to get back to her before she started to really worry.”
Esgalwen smiled tearfully. “Oh, that sounds like him. I hope he’s all right. Do you know why he couldn’t come home?”
“Not particularly. I’m not sure why those people were after him, but I do know he was loathe to lead them to Middle Earth – and to you. So you’ll have to forgive him for not sending any word.”
“Of course I forgive him! Now I just must find him so I can help protect him, little as I am able. I shall not be a burden to him…”
“I should give you a new name, too, then. But first, you must stay with me until your strength returns. You were really almost dead when I found you, never mind the wild animals!”
Esgalwen cringed in embarrassment. “I know… I had to run away from the King’s soldiers who wanted to keep me safe… and at home. But I had to go!”
He nodded. “I understand, for sure. And I’m glad I was able to help you. Now how about you rest some more, and then you can have some more soup when you wake?”
“But I feel restless now!” she cried, struggling to her feet; she noticed she had been lying and sitting on his cloak, which was of black velvet and very beautiful. “I would run, if only I had the strength.”
He looked up at her a moment, and then stood himself. He towered over her, seven feet compared to her five-and-a-half, and she shrank away in fear again. But he knelt on one knee again, with his back to her. “Come on, get on!” He winked over his shoulder in such a friendly way she couldn’t help but giggle.
“What do you mean?”
“I’ll take you for a piggy-back run. It’ll be just as good. Come on! Don’t worry about the things. They’ll keep safe.”
So she climbed on to his back, timidly, and he took her knees, and she put her arms around his neck, and then he ran.
He was as fast as a horse, or so she felt in her still-dizzied state of mind. The wind rushed through their hair, and he dodged trees and leaped over rocks in a way that had her laughing with delight, for at home in Mirkwood, she ran the same way, enjoying the skill of her body.
It was only a short run, but when he got back and laid her back down on the cloak, as gently as he might a child, she fell asleep at once, a smile still on her face.

She woke the next morning, and Valiensin was not there, but there was soup and water and a large paper sign written with flourishes: HELP YOURSELF and a large smiling face.
So she did, and it was even better than the night before. Now she was stronger, and her body no longer trembled with weakness. She felt awake, alert, and ready for the day’s challenges. And the hope that news of her husband had brought her burned brightly in her heart.
She sprang up. The day wasn’t getting any younger, and she needed to find her little boat.
Even as she stepped to the edge of the circle of trees, she heard singing and clapping, and then she saw Valiensin returning, half-dancing through the trees. He was a very care-free person, she decided. But when he saw her, he gave her a little grimace that made her tilt her head to one side, frowning anxiously.
“I’m afraid your boat isn’t in good shape,” he explained as he came up to her. “The mast is broken; the wind picked up last night and knocked it over. You’ll need a new one, and a new sail, too.”
Her face fell. “Oh. Is it that bad?”
“It’s not the best,” he answered. “I can help you out, though. I think I have enough extra in my boat. It’ll take a few days, but that’s all right, yes?”
She nodded, and smiled hopefully. “Yes. Thank you for everything; I don’t know how I can repay you…”
He snorted. “Repay me? Lassie, I have no wish to be repaid. This is my job, my hobby, and my pleasure. Don’t you worry about it.”
She looked up at him from under her eyelashes with sad eyes. “Are you sure?”
He nodded, grinning from ear to long ear.
She couldn’t help but smile back. “All right.”
“Let’s get started, shall we?” He bowed and extended a hand to her, and led her down to the shore where her little boat lay drawn up on the sand.
“Did you like the soup, by the way?”
“Oh, yes, very much. What was in it?”
“Rabbit… I do like your dress. Did you make it?”
“Ah… thank you. I did, but a long time ago. I should probably make a new one… at least so I have an extra change of clothes.”
“I did note this one has salt on it, probably from your coming ashore last night. Not to worry, when we’ve made a plan for fixing this, you can go and wash it.”
Esgalwen blushed in modesty. “But…”
“No one will see you. There’s no one here, and I’m not that sort of fellow. I’ll even lend you something to wear until you’re sorted out again. I think I have something in your size…”
“How…?”
“Oh, well, sometimes I meet these girls; friends of mine, who come from far away. I carry spare clothes for them, just in case… I’ve needed them a couple times. But if they come today, which I don’t think is likely, they can keep wearing their own clothes. You’ll have dibs!”
She giggled. “All right.”
Her boat was a mess. She greatly regretted not stowing everything properly, as she had been taught, but, she reasoned with herself, she was half-crazed with thirst and the boat would have been no good to her if she was dead. But she began right away to set it in order, and Valiensin helped. The broken mast was unstepped and laid on the sand nearby, with the torn sail beside it.
“I’ll wash this too,” she said as she saw it. “It certainly needs it!”
Valiensin nodded, and helped her roll it up.
“Well!” he said. “I’ll get started by finding something to make a new mast with. Do you remember where the camp is? Just head a little uphill and you’ll find a lovely little pond with a stream running through it. It’s rather cold, but…”
“We have been active in the sun…”
“Exactly! So it’ll be a nice change. I’ll get out the clothes for you and leave them in camp. I think the sail can be easily mended. I don’t know if you have sail thread, though, so I’ll go fetch that at the same time.”
“Ah… th-thank you.”
“No problem! Be off with you.” He waved her away.
She trotted back up the hill obediently, keeping an eye out for creatures. He hadn’t said anything about them. She hoped they were nocturnal.
She passed through the camp and hesitated. Her instinct was to get something to cover herself with after she washed, but the only thing she could see was his beautiful cloak, and she wasn’t going to take that.
She hesitated a while longer, trying to drill into herself the explanation that there wasn’t anyone else in the area, and as long as she didn’t go near Valiensin, she could walk around completely naked if she wanted to. Of course, she would not have much of a choice until her dress dried…
She set her face uphill and began walking, trusting that she would know what she found when she found it.
Not far from the camp, but surrounded by a thick wall of bushes, was a pool about twenty metres across. The far side was covered in reeds and lilies and green growing things, but the closer side was mostly plain, with wild grasses growing lush up to the edge and trailing in. The stream flowed along that side. Birds chirped in the trees around. There were not many flowers, but it was altogether lovely, and Esgalwen clapped her hands with delight.
She quickly stripped and washed all her clothing, and the sail, scrubbing at the dirt stains as well as she could. Until she could find soap of some kind, there wouldn’t be much change in that. But at least it wouldn’t smell so bad.
That done, she stepped carefully into the cold and surprisingly deep water.
It didn’t take her long, and in a few minutes, she stepped out again, careful not to get dirt on herself above the soles of her feet. Glancing around self-consciously, she picked up her wet clothes and walked carefully back to the camp.
There, she found a teal dress with a golden belt. It was a little small for her, but she put it on and was surprised at the support it gave to her small chest. She laid her wet clothes out on a patch of grasses, and the sail beside them.
Suddenly tired, she lay down and went to sleep on the grass.

When she woke, the air smelled like good food again, and she was covered in the black cloak. She rolled over and sat up, to see Valiensin poking at something frying in a pan.
“Good evening!” he said. “Did you sleep well?”
“I did, th-thank you.”
“I made some supper. More rabbit, unfortunately, but different, this time.”
“It smells amazing…”
“Thank you!” He speared a chunk and laid it on a plate, and handed it to her along with a fork. “I hope it tastes as good as it smells.”
She tasted it and smiled broadly, and seeing that, he smiled just as broadly.
“So, I found a suitable tree,” he began, sitting back with his back leaning against another tree. “I cut it down already; I can start working on it tomorrow. Not that I’m the greatest shipmaker, but I know a few things about it. I can patch something up for you.”
“And I can certainly repair the sail…”
“Ah, yes, I got the thread. You look lovely, by the way.”
She blushed and looked down. “Th-thank you. It’s a lovely dress.”
“The ladies who’ve worn it are lovely ladies,” he answered. “You, and its regular bearer. She’s a tiny girl, so I’m afraid it doesn’t quite fit you as well as it might, but she also has pretty black hair. Not as long as yours, but very shiny.”
“What is her name?”
“Thusweammernia… is the full name I’ve given her. Raselie is the short form.”
Esgalwen blinked. “Those aren’t even close!”
He laughed a little. “Well, no, but if you knew my language and hers, it would be close enough. Anyway, she’s a sweetheart. I’m teaching her archery.”
“Really? I can use a bow, too!”
“Is that so? You’ll have to show me tomorrow.”
“Why not now?” Esgalwen bounced on her hips. “I am not sleepy at all! I just woke up!”
“You’ll be sorry in the morning,” laughed the other, but he stood with a sweeping gesture. He vanished into the night, and as Esgalwen waited impatiently, he returned with a small-looking bow – but it only looked small because he was so tall. He presented it to her and sat down again.
She took her time with it, after she belted on the quiver. It had been a few years since she’d had to use one, and this one was a strange one to her. It was very old, worn, but the string was brand new. She carefully bent it and strung it; it was like her harp except more flexible.
She missed her harp.
She raised it, drew an arrow from the quiver, and aimed carefully into the darkness outside the firelight. She was small and straight, feet apart, her shyness drowned in an otherworldly calm as she loosed the arrow. The bow made a beautiful twang, and there was a thunk a few seconds later.
Valiensin rose and loped into the darkness, and she trotted after him. She found him where she thought she might, looking at the arrow, buried firmly in the centre of a relatively light-coloured knot in a tree, quite far from the firelight.
The taller elf grinned. “Nicely done! I don’t think you need my help!”
She smiled back sweetly. “I had to learn. Giant spiders lived in my home forest, and we had to defend ourselves, all of us.”
“Looks like it’s worth it. Would you like to keep that?”
Esgalwen gaped. “Doesn’t it belong to your friend?”
“Ehhh, I can make her another. It really doesn’t matter. She comes along so infrequently I almost have to make her a new one every time anyway.”
“Well, as long as you’re sure…”
“Oh, I’m sure. I’m also sure she’d be glad to give it to you! You’re kind of like her, you know, except you’re even more shy.”
Esgalwen blushed. “Ah… Th-thank you.”
“Heh. All right, come back to the fire and we’ll talk about tomorrow.”
She followed him back, and sat down; as she did so, he flopped the cloak over her shoulders. “It gets cold at night, lass. You’ll want this.”
“A-all right. Thank you.”
“Haha, don’t thank me!”
“But won’t you be cold?”
He shrugged. “Nah, probably not. I have three layers already.”
Her eyes widened. “Three layers!? But don’t you get far too warm in the day?”
He shook his head. “No, not really… I’m used to it. Besides, the bottom two layers are very breathable.”
“I-if you say so…”
“I most certainly do. Now, tomorrow, we’ll have a busy day. I’m sure that you’ll be done mending the sail long before I’m done making a new mast, but we’ll both work on our respective jobs, right?”
“Yes! Of course.”
“Then we’ll do that. Oh, and I, er, took the liberty of rewashing your things with soap, while you were asleep… I completely forgot that I hadn’t given you the soap. I am so sorry.”
Esgalwen blushed. “That’s all right. I am just glad they are clean…”
“I’ll give it to you next time. Okay?”
“Thank you very much…”
“Don’t mention it. Really, don’t mention it.” When Esgalwen looked like she was about to protest, he held up a hand. “You look like you have a strong conscience, which probably won’t leave you alone until you say something, but really. I’m just happy to help. No extra thanks necessary.”
Esgalwen shut her mouth, laughing in embarrassment.
“Well, now, how about some sleep? Are you tired again yet?”
Esgalwen considered. “Not really. We Sindar don’t need a lot of sleep, and I’ve been regaining my strength every time I’ve slept. You can sleep! I shall meditate.”
He laughed and nodded, and lay down. In moments, he appeared to be asleep.
Esgalwen sat down, drawing the cloak around her – it was getting colder, as he had said – and remembered.
She remembered the time they had met…
It was after the Battle of Five Armies… the returning Mirkwood Elves had celebrated with many parties, and Esgalwen had gone to many with her sisters. Although she was so shy, among her own people she was less so, and her voice and musical skill were often requested to sing in the band.
But on this one instance, she had been sitting with her sister… talking and giggling on the edge of the dancing… She had realized her glass was empty, and had gotten up to get another drink.
At the refreshments had been a tall, beautiful golden-haired elf, who had – without her asking! – taken her goblet and refilled it for her, and refilled his own.
Then he had asked her to dance.
Eyes wide as saucers, Esgalwen had looked around for her sister, who was laughing at her, and gesturing for her to go on. As the other took their glasses and set them down on the white table, and taken her hands to lead her to the dance, her sister had gone to the band to sing the next song – specifically for them, Esgalwen guessed – specifically to tease her, perhaps.
Her awkward blushes faded, though, as the music began, a sweeping waltz. She could dance with the best of them, and in dance, she did not feel threatened, only challenged – challenged to be worthy of her partner.
All too soon, the song was over, and she looked up into his eyes from in his arms, laughing, and meeting his laughing blue eyes…
And realized how close he was, and fled back to the safety of the back of the band, where she met her mercilessly giggling sister, who embraced her and left her to sing while she went to dance herself.
That was their first meeting.
She came out of the memory in time to realize it was morning. Valiensin was sprawled on his back, breathing evenly.
She smiled to herself and began to search for his breakfast materials to wake him with lovely smells the same way he had been waking her.

The next week was busy – Esgalwen would work on the sail on the beach, near Valiensin working on carving the mast. They’d sing songs back and forth, and talk about their respective homelands. Every day, she also practiced her archery for some time – after the first day, her shoulders ached, but she soon grew back into it. Another thing she practiced with was her little knife – a gift from her husband, and almost as precious as the locket around her neck.
At the end of the week, everything was done. They spent one day, just talking as good friends do. He sat her on his shoulder and carried her around the island, showing her how lovely it was.
“Now,” he said to her later in the afternoon, as they were sitting on the top of the island, gazing at the water stretching seemingly endlessly in all directions, “you’ll probably want a travelling name, too.”
“Why?” she asked, gazing at him innocently.
“Well,” he said, tilting his head, “it wouldn’t do for your husband’s pursuers to simply latch on to people with Sindarin names. It’s for your own safety as much as his.”
“Oh! Okay. What would you suggest? Should I just use my name in Westron?”
“No, because Hidden Maiden is kind of a mouthful. No, I’ll give you a name from my language. How does Illinia sound?”
Esgalwen clapped her hands. “I like that. Ill… Illiana?”
“No, Illinia… Il-lin-ia. It means the same thing. Illin is hidden, and ia is maiden… You like it? I think it will suit you almost as well as your real name, although it doesn’t sound so exotic.”
“It doesn’t sound exotic,” Esgalwen said indignantly.
“It does to me, lassie!”
She laughed. “Very well, I will accept that. And thank you. It’s very flattering to be told that one is exotic. I think you are exotic too, with your tallness and your… ah… strangeness and all.”
He laughed back. “Strangeness? I’ve always been told I’m strange, so that’s hardly exotic to me…”
“Well… there’s your own strangeness, and then there’s your strangeness to me. Your cultural strangeness. You do have some!”
“I see. I’ll accept that, too. Now, practice your name! Say it!”
“Ill-Illin… ia. Ill…linia. Illinia. Illinia. Illinia. Okay, I think I have it.”
“Now, don’t forget, that’s your name, right? So don’t accidentally introduce yourself as Esgalwen, beautiful though that name is.”
She squared her shoulders. “I am Illinia of… er. I am Illinia. From a land far away.” She quirked her head at him. “That will do, right?”
He nodded. “You can work on semi-truthful vague cloudy cover stories on your voyage.”
She laughed. “I will.”
“What are you going to do about food?”
She looked up, startled, and with a look on her face that suggested a deer in sudden lamplight. Her eyes were stunned and horrified.
He chuckled. “Don’t worry. I have plenty to get you started. I don’t know which direction you’re going in…”
“Valiensin, how did you get here? You were so vague about it last time. I want to go to where you came from. Perhaps my husband is there now.”
He nodded. “I can give you enough to get there. It’s almost directly south… and then west, a long, long way.” He spread out his hands, and the air shimmered between them. “All right, so if this is what you call Middle Earth…”
Esgalwen squeaked, for in the air before him, where his hands had gestured broadly, there was a map. An image, hovering, floating in the air! An image not seemingly connected to anything! How was he doing it?
He looked amused, but had the grace to look a little sheepish. “Sorry. I have been cursed, but I consider it a gift… I can make images appear with a little verbal suggestion.”
“Ohhhh…” She slowly crept back from where she had scrambled, frightened. Now she crouched at his elbow, watching the map.
“So we are here, yes?” Tiny images of the two of them appeared, floating in the ocean a long way west of Harad. They were not as far south as she had thought, though. “Yes. So I came from a long way to the west, and then… there was a disturbance. A tear in space, a hole with ragged edges. I think I know who made it, and I need to talk to him about being so sloppy… But anyway, I sailed through, just to see, and found myself here – although at first, it looked just the same. I then sailed north to here.”
All this time, Esgalwen’s eyes had been tracing paths on the map, guided by his words.
“So you will have to sail south, and then find the… the doorway in the air… although ‘doorway’ is a remarkably ordinary word for something so chaotic and extraordinary… and then you must sail west. That is all you have to do. And there is one more thing I can say to guide you… I was almost at the equator.”
“The equator? You mean how the world is bent?”
“Well, round, but yes.”
“Ah, round, that’s what I meant. It used to be flat, you know.”
“Really? My world has always been round.”
She looked at him in wonder. “How did you get to Valinor? Can you find the Straight Path?”
He frowned in perplexity. “I’m afraid we never had a Valinor. There was no Land in the West for us. We only had our countries, and our allies, and… well, that’s another story.”
“Oh.” She looked down. “I’m sorry. That’s rather sad.”
He laughed. “Oh, don’t be sorry for me! I have seen angels. I am content.”
“Angels? You mean, like Maiar and even Valar?” Her brown eyes grew wide in wonder again.
“I think so, yes!”
She clapped her hands. “That makes me so happy! Someday I would like to meet the Valar. I know it will happen sooner or later, but I should like to meet them without dying first…”
He smiled a little sadly. “We all do…”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” she demanded. “Have you been dead?”
He snorted. “Did it come off sounding that way? No… not that I know of. But my youngest brother… when he died, he became a spirit and went with an escort of angels to meet God… He said goodbye first, and that’s how I know. He was granted that grace.”
“Oh…” She hugged him. “I am sorry.”
“Again, no sorrys! He died happy, although sooner perhaps than he would have wished. He wants me to always be happy, as happy as he was, as happy as we all were before the war.” He tilted her face up. “As happy as you are, despite the pain of separation.”
She nodded slowly. “I think I understand.”
“Anyway,” Valiensin said, stretching and breaking the mood. “The way to find this portal! I was even further south than here. Perhaps not actually at the equator. At night, you can barely see the Pole star. You know which one that is, yes?”
She nodded vigorously. “Of course. We have star festivals in the summer. We sing songs to individual stars. I have sung many.”
“Then you’ll almost bid farewell to this one… but not quite! When it hangs barely the width of your outstretched thumb above the horizon, you will have reached the place I was, more or less.”
She nodded. “I can remember that. Thank you so much for everything you have done, Valiensin!”
He waved it off. “What did I tell you?”
“Not to thank you for all the wonderful things you have done to help me live and continue in my quest?”
“Yes, exactly!”
They both burst out giggling.

She set sail, the next day; Valiensin put out his own, slightly larger ship beside hers and sailed with her a little while; they traded banter and laughter and songs. The new mast and repaired sail worked just as well as before.
And she bid him farewell, temporarily switching ships to give him a big hug, the biggest she could muster, and then returned to her own boat and heading south. Valiensin waved until she could not see his arm anymore, which took a long time with her Quendian far-sightedness.
She sailed south for six days, still well-supplied with food and water and the black velvet cloak, which he had given her over her protestations. It was much too big for her, but she was grateful for it at night when she meditated.
On the sixth day, she looked at the Pole star in the morning, and saw it was just above the horizon, where he said it should be. She began watching for strangeness in the air. Not knowing exactly what she was looking for, it would be difficult to find…
After many hours of searching, she caught sight of something strange looking… like a piece of the sea had been curled back like a piece of paper. She drew nearer to it… and gasped.
There was a hole in the air, like someone had punched a hole in a vast sheet of paper with a giant fist. On the other side was a slightly different coloured ocean, and a darker, clouded sky.
She stared at it nervously. If she passed through, she would be in a different world than the one she had lived in all her life – which was approaching two millenia. A different, strange world – but her husband was there. There really was no other choice for her.
She turned the sail and slowly passed through the portal.

“Hey!” cried a voice on the other side, a voice strangely but gracefully accented. “Who are you and what are you doing using my rift?”
She looked around with a frightened cry, and saw him – a man, a human in appearance, with scruffy long brown hair, on a crude raft. He wore a short black robe and a long cloak, and a very strange looking hat.
“Who are you?” he demanded. “Answer me, before I get impatient and banish you to another realm.”
She whimpered, terrified. “I-I’m E-E-Illinia! I’m j-just a traveller! I’m l-looking for my husband and I was t-told this portal would take me to his trail! P-p-please don’t hurt me!”
He stopped whatever he was doing to the portal and came closer on his raft, frowning suspiciously. “Are you sure you’re just a traveller?”
“Y-y-yes?”
“You’re sure you’re not with a group of black-clad men bent on taking over this dimension with other-worldly technology?”
“Ah… no? I’ve never heard of…”
“I’m not sure I believe you! You see, if you’re telling the truth, then you’re no help to me, and if you’re not telling the truth, you’re doing it very convincingly. But if you’re not telling the truth and I don’t believe you, what am I going to do with you? And if you are telling the truth and I don’t believe you, then what happens when you come back to haunt me?” He tilted his head to one side. “Mind you, you were using my rift. You have to know something. Who was it told you this rift would take you to… who? Your husband?”
She nodded quickly. “Valiensin told me. He said he came through one.”
“And who might Valiensin be? Your boss?”
“N-no! He’s also a traveller! I don’t really know much about him… but I trust him…”
“What was your name again? Where are you going? Tell me why I should believe you?”
“Tharash,” chided another voice, a voice vastly amused.

I Know You’re Out There Somewhere: NaNoWriMo2011

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Filed under: Esgalwen,I Know You're Out There Somewhere,Writing — Tags: , — Illinia @ 12:18 am

Hey! From encouragement, I have become brave enough to start posting my NaNo novel online. After all, it’s vaguely coherent, even if it’s RILLY RILLY BAD. (So you have been warned.) This is really a practice novel, practicing certain things (character type, building to a climax, etc.) so constructive criticism is welcomed but not necessarily acted upon.

This is going to be (in later chapters) largely based on the experiences Esgalwen/Illinia had while I was RPing as her in a D+D session once upon a time. We never finished the campaign, though, so the ending will be largely my own. I am, however, going to attempt to make it NOT like this.

This chapter came out fairly quickly and easily, considering I’ve never really thought about this part of her life before, and I think the style is pretty good for the setting. Currently, I’ve lost any semblance of style. I do think that if I were to develop this as a book, I would cut this whole section in some fashion because it really don’t establish much that is important later. All these people? This place? Never see ‘em again. I’m 99% sure. …Unless Tharash decides to take Flairé and/or Gullac for a mayhem-causing visit.

………. >_>

Keep an eye out for random cameos in future chapters!

 

Chapter 1

Esgalwen stared out at the grey of the ocean, gentle wavelets lapping at her bare toes.
She had been that way for nearly fifteen years, now, going out every day to see if she could perhaps spy a small white sail – or possibly grey, by now – returning, returning to her. And she walked along the beach, her crimson dress dragging in the wet sand and shells and seaweed, and her long black hair fluttering rapidly in the strong winds that blew from the sea, and she sang. She sang old songs, love songs, lonely songs.
She lived on the shore of the Bay of Belfalas, in a place where few went. Sauron had fallen many decades before, and she and her husband had moved from Mirkwood – now Greenwood the Great, as of old – to Gondor, to be near the new, charismatic King Elessar, although her husband called him by his Northern name, Aragorn. But the great King had been dead twenty years, and his son, while a good man, was just not the same to her husband. Her husband had heard the call of the sea, and soon had built a boat, a little white boat, and had taken his closest friend, and set sail from the Bay of Belfalas, saying to Esgalwen: “I’ll be back. Do not fear. I will return for you once I have found Valinor.”
The local people, few as they were, called her the Scarlet Lady of the Sea, and some were frightened of her singing.
She lived alone, unafraid, for there were few living things in those parts at all, let alone dangerous things, and what there might be to threaten her, she could defend herself against. Perhaps a prowling wolf, or once a pair of fleeing goblins would go by her little hut. She had some skill with a bow, and a very little with bladed weapons.
And every day she went down to the water’s edge and gazed out across the vast green-grey-blue expanse, hoping for a tiny speck of white.
Esgalwen was a very patient young elf-maid, but she wearied and fretted in her own serene way. And at length she ventured down to the nearest human village for help.
She was not wearing red, but they recognized her anyway. Some hid in fear, while many, particularly young men, followed and stared in fascination.
She went straight to the shipbuilders and asked her question.
“Can you make me a boat?”
The old man stroked his beard thoughtfully. “For you, lass? I thought the Elves were supposed to be master shipbuilders?”
She blushed, and was embarrassed by her blushing. “I am only a singer, sir. I want to follow my husband.”
He chuckled and nodded understandingly. “Well, if I built you a boat, a good little boat to take you on the Great Sea, do you know how to sail it? And how would you pay for it?”
“Oh, I have some money,” she said nonchalantly, having very little idea how much she actually had. “I hope it is enough. If it is not, I can get more somehow or other. Perhaps I can help you build it?”
“The rough beams are heavy, lass.”
“I am stronger than I look, sir.”
“Well, you may try. But would you know how to sail?”
“I don’t, yet. I can swim, but not sail.”
“Ah, well, I can teach you that as well. A singer, eh? That explains why you are always singing, they say. Perhaps you could teach my daughter to sing?”
Esgalwen smiled, a broad childish smile. “I would be delighted to do so! Thank you very much!”
“All right. I’ll begin drafting plans.”

The boat took the rest of the year and into the next. The shipbuilder’s daughter was a spoiled little brat who was quite tone-deaf, but Esgalwen heard beauty in her voice and tried and tried to open her ears and calm her impetuousness. “When she is a woman, she will be the most beautiful woman in the village,” she said one day, and the next day the shipbuilder showed her how gracefully the prow of her boat was carven.
And of course, now that she visited the village, she had to defend herself gently from the young men who were enamoured of her, and from the old who feared her.
And every day, she still spent all the evening wandering, watching, and singing.

At last, on a sunny summer’s day, the boat was done, and the shipbuilder began to teach her to sail. She was a quick study, and after two weeks, she was able to handle the ship in the little harbour of the village.
It was only a few days later that her tremulous plans were upset entirely.
She had gone to the village as usual, now no longer afraid to wear her crimson gown. Her black hair was tucked behind her small pointed elf ears; she had a red flower behind the left ear.
“You are back again?” asked Earstellen, the old herbwoman of the village. Earstellen hated Esgalwen, and she couldn’t make out why.
“Yes, I am, my lady,” she answered, as she always did. If she showed respect always, perhaps the hatred would lessen. But not today…
“You little harlot. Prancing around like you own the place… encouraging our youth to idleness with your witchcraft and wicked charms…”
Esgalwen’s eyes grew wide with consternation and hurt. “Why do you think such of me?”
“Bewitching our good Shipman into granting you favours and working your wicked ways on his impressionable young daughter! You should be gone from here, you sea-witch! You mystic elf-spawn!”
Esgalwen’s eyes were filling with tears when help came to her.
“Oh, shut up, old woman,” drawled a baritone voice from behind her. “She’s just a girl.”
Esgalwen turned to see Joyun, one of the village youths, standing protectively beside her. He gave her a grin and a wink, and she felt herself blushing, her eyes falling to the sandy road.
“See what I mean?” Earstellen’s voice rose to a shriek. “She has caught you in her spell! You poor boy, who will save you from the dead race, the ones who come over the sea to taunt and to destroy our minds?”
Joyun shrugged and rolled his eyes. “Come on, miss. Let’s leave her ravings. Don’t worry, we all like you!”
Esgalwen blushed some more. “Th-thank you. I don’t know why she would say such things…”
“Oh, some of the elders don’t like elves. They never met any before, you know? And you’re so mysterious, living alone on the beach way out there like you do. They think you must be powerful to do that, and so they’re afraid.”
“Y-you’re very perceptive…”
“Thanks!” He puffed out his chest. “Now we younger ones, and some of the more book-learned old ones, we know better. In fact,” and he leaned in with a conspiratorial grin, which Esgalwen shied away from but couldn’t help responding in kind, “sometimes we sneak out and go find you, and watch you singing.”
Esgalwen covered her face with a little cry of alarm.
Joyun laughed, thoroughly amused by her embarrassment. “Oh, don’t hide! We love your singing! I have no idea what it means, but it’s very pretty. And we’d never bother you, you know. Sometimes we also sneak up to Shipman’s house in the mornings to hear you teach. You should really teach all of us. They say girls like a guy who can sing.” And he raised his eyebrows at her.
Esgalwen hardly knew where to look. True, this happened periodically, that one of the young men would approach her and flirt with her. But she was so unused to it! Even after all these months, she was still as awkward as when it had first happened. Besides –
“Oh, you do know I’m married, right?”
“I know…” and his face fell. Then it brightened. “But you’re just so cute! And beautiful. And vulnerable. I mean, I don’t want you to be sad, but if your husband is gone for good… I might have a chance?”
Esgalwen hunched up her shoulders a little. “He isn’t gone for good… but I do have to find out what happened to him. I am sorry for you, but I hope you find a lovely girl someday.”
He pouted a little. “But now I want to marry an elf maid… and there aren’t any others around here!”
They had reached the dock, and Esgalwen gave him a little curtsey. “Th-the world is full of surprises. Please excuse me…”
“Of course. See you later, miss!”
She was in the boat, holding the mooring line with a wide, excited smile as the shipbuilder came to teach her.
“Good afternoon, lass! Eager as always, I see.”
“Yes, sir.” She paused awkwardly. She never knew what to say at this point.
“Well, let’s see how well you…” he trailed off, and with one foot in the boat, looked back towards the shore. “One moment, lass, I must see what that is all about.”
There were bright gleaming flashes from the centre of town, and a black and silver banner. Esgalwen frowned anxiously. That was the banner of the King of Gondor, and while this village was part of Gondor, knights had never come before.
The shipbuilder got out and walked to the end of the dock, where Joyun was still leaning casually. The soldiers were coming nearer, rather casually. Esgalwen leaned closer, listening intently, trying not to be seen, although her bright red dress made that hard to accomplish.
“Is that her?”
“It looks like it…”
“What do you want with the lass?” the shipbuilder asked politely.
“Well…” The lead soldier drew out a scroll and held it up. “His Majesty King Eldarion Telcontar, King of Gondor and Arnor, and Lord of the Men of Middle Earth, is concerned for the well-being of Esgalwen of Mirkwood, who is the wife of the friend of his father. Having heard that she is in this area and that she is desirous of pursuing her travelling husband which King Eldarion deems to be unsafe, he requests that she relocate to Minas Tirith, capital of Gondor, where she may be under his care and safekeeping. For if any harm were to come to her, her husband would surely be most grieved, and for his father’s sake, King Eldarion would wish that to be prevented at all cost.” He rolled up the scroll. “So, Lady Esgalwen, I am pleased to request that you return with us to the capital, until your husband returns.”
Esgalwen’s flushing cheeks and large unhappy eyes seemed to disconcert him. “My lady, what is the matter?”
“But…” she whispered, “I want to find him. I can no longer bear this waiting.”
“Eh? Sorry, I can’t hear you, my lady.”
“I will find him!” she said more strongly, and trembled at her boldness. “I am not as weak as I appear. When he was in the War of the Ring, I ventured from Mirkwood to Gondor (by accident, it is true) to find him (although, again it is true that he came south to find me). I will find him again, although he is in the unknown lands where none know his name.”
“But Lady Esgalwen… the King…”
“I am grateful for the King’s attention. He always was a sweet boy.” The soldiers tried to hide a grin at their King being called ‘a sweet boy’; their King who was in the prime of his life and very manly and wise. “But I must decline. I take responsibility upon myself… and Lord Eldarion must not worry about me.” She smiled. “I assure you, I have every incentive to remain alive and whole and well.”
“But…” the soldier began helplessly.
“I’d advise you to listen to the lass – er, lady,” the shipbuilder said. “She knows what she’s talking about.”
“No, sir,” said the soldier, more firmly. “My King’s command is to be certain that Lady Esgalwen is safe. This is also the wish of her brother, Lord Hano, who is even now in Minas Tirith.”
“Oh, would Hano come with me?” she cried impulsively.
The soldier looked startled. “Well, my lady, you must come back and ask him.”
For a moment she hesitated… and then cast loose the line. “I am so sorry, my lords, to make you come all this way… but I cannot come back with you… I would never be let go again! I must find my husband above all else.”
“Hoi! Wait! Lady!”
She paddled out of easy reach. “I am so sorry! Please beg my brother to forgive me… I know this will hurt him terribly. But I must… Please understand…”
“No! Stop her!”
“Let her be!” Joyun stepped forward, and several others of the village youths followed him. “Go on, Miss Esgalwen!”
“Obstructing the King’s Soldiers…”
“I know! But Miss Esgalwen shouldn’t be cooped up.” Joyun stood firm, a strong young man, ready to grapple with the first solder who should come at him. “You should see her wandering the shore; then you’d know. She’s not a city girl.”
Poor Esgalwen looked back and saw villagers struggling with soldiers, but her sail was up, and she was rapidly moving away from shore. As the soldiers saw that it was useless to catch her by the dock, a few began attempting to launch a boat, but most just stood and watched her.
“Goodbye!” she called. “Thank you for everything!”
“Goodbye, Miss Esgalwen! Lass!”
There was a bitter screech from the old women.
“Please reconsider!” called the soldier. “If you should return, you will always have a warm welcome in Gondor or Arnor!”
“I know.”
The soldiers began to spread out, no doubt to patrol the long length of shore nearby, so she would not be able to return to her house for water or food or other supplies. She turned her back to Middle Earth and set her hands to the lines and the tiller, sailing out onto the bosom of the blue ocean.

Four days later, and things did not look so good.
She lay curled in the bottom of the boat, watching the sun rise in a different place than she had ever known. She had just set out wherever the wind would take her, and it was taking her southwest. There was no sign of land in any direction.
Her throat was parched so dry it rasped when she swallowed, her tongue swelled in her mouth, and her belly gnawing itself to pieces.
She drifted, under a sun brighter and hotter than any she’d ever known, huddled miserably behind the sail to protect herself as she could – her pale northern skin was burning. For that reason, also, she could not take off her long dark dress, which had sleeves to the wrists and skirt to the ankles. Besides which, her natural modesty made it impossible for her to even undress to her underwear, even though she was completely alone.
So she lay, sweating and burning and suffering, wondering if the torment of the wicked after the world ended would be any greater, and the sun turned overhead.
In the evening, finally, a new scent came to her on the wind, a stronger scent – a smell of greenery, with a touch of unfamiliar flowers thrown in. She sat up cautiously, stretched her small cramped drained body, and looked around at the horizon.
South of her there were some low shadows on the horizon. So she pulled the sails to catch the wind to carry her there.
The wind grew stronger as she approached, and her heart held more and more hope. Hope that she might find water, that she might survive long enough to properly begin her mission.

It was long into the night when she heard the rush of waves on shore far ahead. They did not sound violent, so she continued, slowly, until she felt the keel of her little boat scrunch on gravel. Not even bothering to touch the unfurled sails, she weakly clambered out of the boat and found herself waist-deep in water. She floundered ashore and stood for a moment, breathing carefully, trying to maintain her strength.
She staggered closer to the rustle of trees. Reaching one, she put out a hand to steady herself on it, and sniffed for water. The sound of vegetation was driving her crazy. She plunged recklessly into the undergrowth and headed for the sound of trickling.
She found it! A tiny brook, spilling through plants she couldn’t identify in the dark. She half-fainted beside it and put her face in it, gulping the life-giving water.
She did not drink too deeply; she had experienced water deprivation before, in the Brown Lands, although it had not taken her four days to save herself. But that time she had drunk until her stomach was bloated, and then vomited it up again. So this time she was more careful, although her body urged her on.
She lay, panting, on the edge of the brooklet, rejoicing in the coolness of the night.
Then it occurred to her that her own was not the only panting she heard.
She stiffened, and thought she heard a growl.
With a half-stifled shriek, she rolled over, to discover a wild animal of a strange kind practically standing over her. It was like a wolf, or a dog, but it was smaller and had larger teeth. But no matter how small, it was large enough for Esgalwen, and she could hear more than one in the darkness.
She tried to scramble away, to grab a rock or a branch or anything, but it came at her with a single bound and pinned her to the ground, straddling her. She had one arm up over her vulnerable throat, but that wouldn’t stop it for long.
It snarled, and lunged for her…
With the suddenness of lightening, an arrow pierced the creature in the head and it slumped on her, needle-like teeth tearing her hand with its weight. The others fled, making strange howling noises of fear.
Esgalwen fainted.

July 14, 2011

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