November 30, 2009

Rekka no Ken: The Tactician and the Jewel: Sly Tongues Aplenty

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Chapter 3: Twisted Paths     Chapter 5: Secrets in the Storm

 

Chapter 4: Sly Tongues Aplenty

Pent’s company continued winding its way through the mountains between Etruria and Lycia, fighting off the occasional bandit attack. They hadn’t seen any soldiers since they had fought Lord Blier. Ceniro found the farseer extraordinarily useful and would hardly put it down, although he nearly learned the hard way not to rely on it wholly as a substitute for eyes when he himself was attacked by a bandit whom he had thought further away than he was. Other than that slight slip, his tasks were much easier and even more successful than they had been, though he attributed that in part to the fact that bandits were disorganized and stupid.

When Pent spoke to Castle Wrigley, Erk and Louise both told him they were fine. Erk was nearly finished reading his “General Compositional Theory of Anima Magic: Volume 3”, and was incorporating what he had learned into his Fire spell, and was looking forward to the discussion of Thunder in Volume 4. Louise did not say too much, but did show him a lopsided brown rabbit she had embroidered on a pillow.

Douglas was still in contact, though barely – the magic of the staff was wearing thin. He had disturbing news.

“I think there is another spider in this web, Pent. I don’t know who for certain, yet, but several people have been acting strangely.”

“Not on orders from Blier, Arcard, or Ocery?”

“No. Blier is gone, of course, but Arcard has been staying out of it and the signs are too subtle for Ocery. Aldash, though, has been sneaking around. My people have spotted him apparently making deals with Lord Eshan.”

“Eshan!?” Pent cried. “That’s very disconcerting.”

“He’s also been talking to Lesil, though that may be unconnected with this affair. Lesil does have business in Faria at present, the county next door to Reglay, where Aldash has relatives.”

Pent sighed. “The question – does this plot reach further than it appears on the surface, or are we dragging too many names into the mix?”

Douglas nodded. “I would personally suspect that we have not found out half of what is going on.”

“Magic jewels can do that,” Pent agreed wearily.

“The most worrying part is that my knight Rhost occasionally has this funny look on his face, and he’s been jumpy. He’s still true to me and to his knighthood, and he hasn’t gotten short of temper yet, so I will continue to trust him, but I do think someone has approached him for information and he doesn’t want to let me know.”

“I see…”

“How close are you to finding the jewel? I can’t say how glad I will be to have this all over with.”

“Unfortunately, I still don’t know where it is. I think we’ve been getting closer – the last two villages told us it was rumoured to be either blue or purple; they weren’t quite sure on that account. One says one, and the other says another, you know. There haven’t been any villages around for the last couple days, though, only thieves and highwaymen.”

Douglas shook his head. “I hope you make it safely, Pent. Good luck to you.”

“Thank you, for all you have done, Douglas. We’ll speak again soon.”

 

 

Lord Lesil glared at Aldash, a man with white-blonde hair and dark blue eyes, dressed in purple silk and red armour. “I don’t see why this visit is necessary. It’s a pretty little pigsty, nothing more. It could be taken within an hour at most.”

“Nevertheless, you must visit again tomorrow after your negotiations are concluded with Faria. I leave for the south in an hour. I don’t have time to discuss this, Lesil. It must be spied out to make a probability a certainty. The country is rich, yes? If you want it-“

“I don’t want that frilly flower-garden of a county. You know what I want.”

“Yes, well, if you want it, you will do as Lord Eshan wishes. Once you have obtained it, your business will be concluded and I shall trouble you no more.”

“I hope to heaven that we may move soon, then,” Lesil muttered, watching Aldash leave Lesil’s castle and mount his horse. One of Aldash’s attendants released a pigeon and Lesil watched it flap away, wondering what news it brought and if it were to Eshan or Arcard or a third, more secret master.

 

Ceniro pulled his cloak tighter around himself and his hood lower, fumbling with the fastenings with numbed fingers. It was raining heavily, a steady cold rain from the west. Pent and Fiora didn’t seem to be bothered by it at all, a fact that earned them more respect from the tactician. Albert, the monk from Kafti, on the other hand, was greatly irritated by the rain, though he was determined not to show it and trudged along grimly.

 

“Whoa! Frank! Help! Someone, help my brother!” Someone was calling urgently from around a bend in the path.

Pent, in the lead, sped up. At a wave from Ceniro, Fiora and her pegasus leaped lightly over him and to the top of a crag. “Cavaliers,” she called back. “Two of them. Attacked by bandits. Do we assist?”

“Of course!” Pent cried, picking his way along the slippery path as fast as he could. Ceniro ran, nearly fell, picked himself up, and joined Pent. Albert, still determined not to show his weakness, joined him a moment later. Priscilla was nearly last, but Caddie stayed back to help her and the horses along.

“Fiora, they have a shaman on the bump just beyond the cavaliers. Please take him out. Pent, Cavven, George, Albert, assist the cavaliers. Get between them and the bandits. Cavven, take the axe-man on the left. Albert, George, attack the swordfighter on the right.” Pent was using fire spells. His tactician wondered if thunder spells might be more effective in the rain, but then realized they might be too effective and harm his own side, though he had absolute trust in Pent’s abilities.

“I should use my sword, right?” George asked. “I can use my bow if you really need me to, but…”

“No, you should use your sword. Keep your bow dry for now.”

Ceniro caught up to the cavaliers. They were dead centre in the narrow valley, just off the road. One had light brown hair and blue eyes, wearing yellow armour with white edges, and the other, blue haired and black eyed, wore dark blue armour with white edges; they both wore white tunics that were muddy with travel. The blue one was lying in a heap beside his black horse, blood from a cut on his forehead streaming down his face, and the yellow one, clearly his younger brother, had dismounted in a hurry from his brown horse and was cradling him.

Priscilla hurried up, leaving Caddie to bring her horse along more slowly, and raised her staff over the blue cavalier. The yellow cavalier looked up with a grateful expression of relief.

“Oh, thank you, thank you! I was worried for a minute, there. My name is Andy. This is my older brother Frank. We’re mercenary knights from East Bern.” His voice was much deeper than Ceniro expected.

“Well met, Andy and Frank,” Pent said, turning from brigands to kneel next to the young men. “We’re just glad to help.”

Frank stirred, grunting, and put a hand to his head. Andy pulled him up to sitting and gave him a hug. “We’re all right, Frank! These people are helping us.”

“Then what are we doing sitting in the mud?” Frank demanded. “We have to get up and fight, too!”

“Absolutely, brother!”

“Hello,” Ceniro said. “I’m the tactician for this group. My name is Ceniro. For this battle, I’m going to be using this magic thing called a farseer. It lets me plan strategies and talk to my people, so don’t be surprised if you hear me speaking but I’m not nearby. Okay?” They both nodded. “Frank, I want you to attack that axe-man standing under that tree over there with your sword. Andy, please attack the myrmidon beside him with your lance.”

“Yes, sir!”

A few minutes later, Caddie, who had somehow gotten ahead of the group and was fighting at the top of the pass with Fiora, turned back to Ceniro. “Reinforcements! Enemies!”

Cavven cursed, then swallowed other words and offered a muttered ‘sorry’ to the air near Priscilla. Albert was clearly thinking along the same lines.

Ceniro and Pent hurried forward to the pass. Caddie and Fiora were holding against the enemy fighters, axe-men and mercenaries mostly, but only just, and as Ceniro glanced at his farseer, he could see why. Then he came over the head of the pass and saw for himself.

The valley beyond was filled with soldiers, not mountain thieves, but actual soldiers. Ceniro, comparing the view with his farseer, counted three wyvern knights, a pegasus knight, four cavaliers, five miserable-looking archers, two shamans, four monks, four mages, two myrmidons, and twenty each of axe-men and swordsmen. In front of them all was a paladin.

“Oh, dear,” Ceniro breathed. “This will be difficult, even if we discount the archers.”

“Where did Aldash get the wyvern knights from?” Pent murmured, beside him. “Yes, that’s Aldash on the horse. He looks like he wants to say something. That’s why the others aren’t attacking yet.”

“Ah. Well, I will set up our side for the inevitable.”

“Good luck,” Pent told him, smiling from beneath drenched silver locks plastered to his face. Ceniro ducked behind a lump of rock sticking out from the mountain beside him and began to direct his units.

“We should be able to hold them here at the pass if we do it carefully and only let a few come at a time,” he said, gesturing for Priscilla to move her horse and the pack-horse back into a clump of trees on the right. Caddie, Cavven, and George went into the birch woods on the left of the path. “The real trick will be doing it without getting surprised by those wyverns, and the pegasus, and the shamans. And the monks. They have a lot of monks.” Fiora went further back, hovering at the level of the peaks on either side of her, ready to charge the flying units when they came over the crest of the hill, keeping an eye out for ambushes.

“George, you will probably have to help Fiora; she can’t deal with four fliers at the same time. Will your bow work in the woods? Is it dry enough?”

“Yes, it is. You just give the word.”

Ceniro nodded, a little nervous, and put Andy and Frank dead centre on the path, with the instructions to hit the enemy fast and then pull back, riding in circles if necessary. He worried about the footing, but there was nothing else really to do. Then he went to watch Pent talking with Aldash. Pent and Albert would fill in the hole on the right in front of Priscilla.

“-that’s preposterous,” Pent was saying clearly, rocking back on his heels. “And silly. Why should I join you?”

“Consider our great numbers, Lord Pent. With our forces at your disposal, we could comb the mountains even more quickly for the Jewel of Elimine, and dispatch brigands more easily. Consider, also, that if you oppose us, you will be cut down in moments. Your great power and knowledge is not enough to stand against all of us. Blier was weak and foolish. You won’t have the same luck here.”

“Pent, we’re ready. When he attacks, get back here as quick as you can,” Ceniro whispered into the farseer. Pent raised a hand to show he understood and ran it through his rain-slicked hair.

“I still don’t understand why you want me to join you. You’ve stated why it’s in my interest to join you. Why should we let you join us?”

Aldash spread his hands disarmingly. “We have the greatest interest in discovering the Jewel of Elimine. Lord Eshan, though he is not a formal member of the Eliminean church, has acquired Elimine’s Staff. The only thing missing is the jewel, and he desires to present the staff to the church whole. It would be a greater honour for him. I am his loyal vassal, and thus I have been sent to inform you of our plans.”

Ceniro knew Pent would be rolling his eyes at Aldash calling himself ‘loyal’.

“Come, let us join your search. You will, of course, be allowed to study the jewel once it has been joined with the staff and presented to the church. No one could deny you that.”

Pent hesitated. Ceniro saw Frank lean over to whisper to Andy and the tactician frowned at him.

Pent laughed shortly and came running back to where Ceniro waited, turning back at the top of the pass. “Sorry, Aldash, but I can’t do that. I already have my own faithful little band, and I know better than to trust a word you say. I know neither you nor Eshan have any interest in the study of that jewel, no study at all except power. So I say to you, firmly and irrevocably, no.”

Aldash scowled darkly. “Then you will be destroyed without trace. Attack!”

 

“Sir Aldash,” said a deep voice. “You have failed, haven’t you?”

Aldash coughed, trying weakly to move. He felt healing magic upon him and sat up, slowly. His face had been cut horribly over his left eye.

“Vork,” growled Aldash. “I-I…”

“There is no need to speak. Lord Pent is stronger than we have been informed, and exceptionally lucky, but his luck will not last forever. Your men who fled have mostly been retrieved. You will be of use again.”

The white-robed figure and the battered paladin warped away, out of the valley of battle.

 

“We can’t thank you enough, sirs,” Andy said earnestly in the next valley over. “I think we would have been killed if you hadn’t been nearby.”

“You’re welcome,” said Pent affably. “Like I said before, we’re just glad to be able to help. But you said you’re mercenaries?”

“Yes, sir,” said Frank. “We’re mercenaries from East Bern. We were knights abandoned by our lord, and now we earn our own living, defending villages and the like.”

“Hmm.” Pent thought for a moment, then turned to his tactician and saw the look on his face. “Thinking what I’m thinking, eh, Ceniro?”

“Yes, I believe I am, Pent. Please?”

Pent laughed. “You don’t have to ask.” He turned to the cavaliers. “Would you like some work for the next week or two?”

Andy brightened considerably. “We’d love to work with you, sir!” Frank nodded. “We’re good at fighting in mountains, since that’s where we are!”

“Well, that’s settled, then,” Pent said. “Welcome aboard. And you don’t have to call anyone ‘sir’ if you don’t want to. We’re a little eccentric that way. For some reason, they all still call me sir except Ceniro here.”

“That could be something to do with the fact that you’re still Count Reglay,” Priscilla said shyly. Pent shrugged and rolled his eyes.

“And you definitely don’t have to call me ‘sir’,” Ceniro told them. “In fact, I really would prefer it if you didn’t. I’m no lord, and in my last campaign, everyone called me by my name.”

Andy shrugged. “I guess we can do that.”

“Thank you so much,” Frank added again warmly.

 

Louise herself answered the door. “Lord Lesil! How kind of you to call. What can I do for you?”

“I came to avail myself of your hospitality once more, my dear lady. Surely you would like some company?”

Louise resisted the urge to say “never yours, you creepish twisted snake, and that’s the second time you used that line since you visited three days ago” and invited him in.

They sat in the marble room, Louise’s favourite sitting room with its big white soft armchairs and lush red carpet.

“A game of chess, milady?” Lesil asked, waving carelessly at the little ivory and ebony chess set in the corner. Louise nodded, smiling politely. She lost, not unusual when she was playing against Lesil.

The silence was nearly unbearable, but Louise thought that speech might be more unbearable. Lesil was so different from Pent. Where Pent was warm, cheerful, funny, tender, and – when not engaged in research – thoughtful for her comfort and happiness, Lesil had no sense of humour at all, was aggressive and proud, and his pleasantness seemed only a mask over a face of lust for power. His eyes were cold and she suppressed a shudder each time he looked at her.

“Excellent match, milady. Of course, I won, but I am an experienced general. While I hear you are an amateur archer of sorts, one must never forget you have no knowledge of war.”

Louise bent her head politely.

“You are lonely, are you not, my dear, with Lord Pent away?”

“Oh, no, milord,” Louise replied earnestly. “Erk is always here, and I have plenty of things to do. I have my archery, as you said, and I have my own reading – and I do love making food with our cook, although I am not very good at it yet.”

Lesil frowned slightly. “If I were married, I would not treat my wife in such a way, nonetheless. I would not leave her helpless in my castle while I went gallivanting across the country. And cooking! It is no fit occupation for a lady.” He shook his head. “If I were married, my wife would be above all that. She would have no need of such things to pass the time.”

Louise coughed lightly. “I am sure there are many ladies who agree wholly with your views.”

“But none of them are as beautiful as the foolish woman I love,” said Lesil, his gaze raking her body. Louise pretended not to notice and tried to engage him in other conversation. They talked of horses and hunting for a while, and then Lesil asked to see a little more of the house and grounds. She obliged him, though she avoided Erk’s room. The young mage was sure to be studying hard and she did not want to bother him. Not while Lesil was around, at any rate. When they reached the courtyard, she did not take him into the barracks out of respect for the soldiers’ privacy, but Yens, near the door, came out and saluted smartly. Louise thought Lesil looked, at last, a little bit impressed.

But she didn’t even show him the rabbit pillow.

When he had gone, Louise rushed upstairs and sat alone in her bedroom, twisting her hands together anxiously.

Finally, she collected herself and dressed in her archery gear and spent three hours sending arrows thudding viciously into targets in the garden.

Erk came to find her. “Lady Louise? Usually you have called me at least twice by now to take a break. What is the matter?”

“Oh, Erk…” Louise began, her next arrow sliding from her slender fingers. “I’m so worried.”

“About Lord Pent?” the mage asked quizzically, sitting on a bale of hay and running a hand through his purple hair.

“No… Yes… No… Well… Yes. But not for his safety, this time.”

“Lady Louise, it is obvious you are under a great deal of stress. Tell me, and we’ll find a way to solve it together.”

“Well…” Louise sat down beside Erk, took a deep breath, stopped twisting her golden braid, passed both hands over her face, and began.

 

Douglas was walking to the throne room of Castle Aquleia when he heard raised voices in a side room. It was Duke Ocery, the strong lord who had showed signs of interest in the jewel Pent was after, and another. Douglas listened for a moment and then decided it was probably Arcard.

“Why can’t you see?” Ocery was saying. “I can handle myself. I’m not going to let any other bastard have all the fun chasing down Pent and that jewel. I’ll let him find it, of course, but I’m strong enough to take possession of it and keep it.”

Arcard said something in a low voice.

“You coward,” Ocery said. “That knight of Douglas’s has the right idea, at least. I never thought he had it in him. He was always playing the faithful little apprentice.”

Douglas stiffened and walked away quickly. He had heard enough.

“Percival! Percival, come here, lad.” The blonde squire came running from Douglas’s study. “See if Rhost is in his room, lad. I want to talk to him about something.”

The boy was back almost immediately. “There’s no one there, sir. And it seems strangely empty. Should I check the barracks? Or the sparring ground? Or-“

Douglas raised his hand. “That’s all right, Percival. Just go and continue what you were doing. I’ll find him myself.”

Rhost’s room was quite empty; both of Rhost and some of his personal belongings, especially clothes. There was a note on the desk, addressed to General Douglas. The old knight wondered that his squire had missed it.

“Dear sir,” the note read, “I write to you with regret, but also hope. Regret that I must disobey your word that has been law to me these last ten years, but hope that you may think better of me once you find out where I am gone.”

“I could not ignore the stories that have been circulating about the holy jewel that Count Reglay has gone to find. I suspect he has your help in this somehow, sir, though I never knew for certain and I know better than to commit certainties to paper. I have heard tale of the mighty powers of this jewel and have thought that, though all the stories be false, yet it would be great honour for my family if I were to either find the jewel myself, or at least to assist Count Reglay. Granted, I have never met him, and have only his portrait to go by, but I am sure I will find him, either on the way there or the way back. But it is not only I who have heard the stories, and perhaps attended to them more than I should – Lorad has disappeared with horse and arms, and his closest companions are complaining that they were left behind. It is quite certain he has gone in search himself. Sir, I know I am only one man, perhaps off on a wild goose chase. Yet I cannot risk even the smallest chance that such a one as Lorad discover this prize.”

“Please forgive my hasty departure, but I am afraid if I see you, sir, you will keep me here and send someone else in my place. I will ever be your true knight, but I beg your forgiveness (rather than permission) and leave, for this quest. I will be back soon, I am sure. Do not worry. I will be careful and always keep your training at the front of my mind. I have entrusted my duties to Harald; he should carry them out as well as I. I also beg Cecilia’s forgiveness that I will not be around to call upon her as I promised.”

“Yours ever,”

“Rhost.”

Douglas refolded the note slowly and sat down in the wooden chair, putting a hand to his head. All that time, and Rhost had suddenly snapped and run off into the blue. It was almost absurd. It couldn’t have been just the stories flying all over the capital; it had to have been constant pressure from someone Rhost trusted. There was no other way he would abandon Douglas and flee the castle.

Well. He was late for his meeting. Douglas rose and walked swiftly to the throne room.

 

Chapter 3: Twisted Paths     Chapter 5: Secrets in the Storm

November 29, 2009

The Totally Not-Canon Adventures of Flairé: City

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          Leslie: Wow.

          Flairé: Nice, huh?

Ouch. 5 hours late. It officially takes 4 hours for a page, and I was doing other things all day… Anyway, now we get to see what they were looking at last page! It’s a city! With vastly oversized gates! The ship sailing into harbour has the royal emblem on its sail, sort of. Lilar-Moihh means Sun-path. So, Sunset Harbour, basically. Except more poetic. It’s a city of mostly white stone, but I did do some pale greys. They were too subtle and got washed out, unfortunately.

Um. Not much to say. Classes are almost over! I’m loading the rest of Pent’s Story into auto-updates! I want to compose stuff and examine Zela’s point of view! Flairé’s a lot darker and more twisted than I ever gave him credit for…

Flairé: (mutters) Speak for yourself…

Just… don’t kill his brothers, okay? Anyway, he’s fine now.

Flairé: (stands on his head and pulls faces)

And I want to explore Zela’s psyche because I’m sure it’s just as good. And Flaer. And Menad and Marteth. But Menad will be trickier because there are no parts from his POV. Hmm.

Today my Mom coloured a unicorn in a colouring book that was lying around. So we were colouring together! Yay!

Oh, and because it’s Advent I get to play all kinds of fantastic music in church.

 

EDIT: Been doing some research on online website stores. Are there any that let you sell both T-shirts/random cool stuff AND books?

Also all the chapters except the very last one of Pent’s Story are lined up for the next week. Enjoy! Also plz comment if you have anything to say about them. I realize the villain gets dramatically less scary by the time we actually meet him. Sawwy. I can’t write good megalomaniacs.

Today’s Flairé comic

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Filed under: Random blog posts — Illinia @ 9:41 am

Today’s Flairé comic will be a bit late, again. Church now. Sorry!

November 27, 2009

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Filed under: Random blog posts — Illinia @ 1:58 pm

Hey, guys! Been super busy this week, with an essay and practicing and sleeping and The Customer Is Not Always Right and all.

Just wanted to point out a couple things:

There are about 4 days left in my art contest, so if you were planning to enter, you might want to do that soon. If you’re too busy to make an entry right now, just comment and I’ll extend the deadline. …I have no submissions right now. : (

I’m playing Liszt in May Ling’s Class Recital tomorrow, so if you’re in Victoria, you may or may not want to come and see if I mess up or not! : D I’m also playing it next Friday in Fridaymusic, the weekly lunch concert at 12:30 in the PTY hall… well, I’m probably playing it! They haven’t let me know for sure yet!

I’m looking for an alto singer and a soprano singer for a little recording project for early December. Anyone want to help?

Similarly, anyone want to come to salsa on Wednesday nights at Vertigo in the SUB? It’s super fun, but no one I talk to seems interested, and the interested folks are busy! Strange…

It’s a nice day outside! And time for lunch!

November 22, 2009

Summary of the Novel

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Filed under: 1. The Adhemlenei (The Four Kingdoms), Writing — Tags: — Illinia @ 3:19 pm

Okay. Here’s a serious summary of the novel to go on the back cover, possibly. It’s only a first draft, like the book itself. Which title should I use? End of Nations sums up the physical plot, while Sword’s Innocence sums up the emotional/symbolic plot/theme.

 

 Adhemlenei: End of Nations/Sword’s Innocence

       In an ancient land called the Adhemlenei, The Four Kingdoms, where
unicorns, dragons, and griffons live with elves in peace and beauty, unrest is
brewing. Death and war, so foreign at first to these people, are forced upon
them as insanity creeps into the lands. In the midst of the strife, elf Prince
Flaer, his wife Zela, and his eldest son Flairé must choose between truth and
peace as they struggle to restore reason to the land.

 

Cheesy, huh? : D

The Totally Not-Canon Adventures of Flairé: Birdies

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          Flairé: Anyway, let’s go to the city! You should have a look around now that you’re here.

          Leslie (looks at him): O-okay.

         (walk hand in hand, birdies)

Sorry for being late today. I didn’t have this one drawn or anything, so I did that as soon as I got home from church and JUST finished. That’s… four hours? Eeek, that’s a bit longer than I wanted to spend on it. But look! It’s incredibly colourful! I decided not to be lame, and put in a background! I wonder what they’re looking at in the last panel?

Oh, and I used some coloured Sharpies for some of the colour this time, and they go down so smoothly it’s incredible. You can see it in two trees and a bush in the first panel!

So… I’m a-gonna post my story here in December (after Pent’s Story) and then re-edit it and post it again. My bro is about 20% of the way through the story and has made some good criticisms (the romance is waaaaay too obvious) and some dumb criticisms (”I don’t like the grammar in this sentence.” “Yeah, but it’s not bad grammar so too bad.”).

Oh, and just for laughs… how do you “make a joyful noise unto the Lord” when you also have a vow of eternal silence?

Here’s how.

Now I need to go catch up on slee- I mean, piano practice.

November 21, 2009

Summary of the Novel

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In Microsoft Word, buried in the Options in a list of unused functions, is an ‘autosummary’ function. I found out about this on the NNWM website, and made some summaries of my novel (which sucks, by the way, so I’m going to have to rewrite most of it and cut the rest - because I can’t revise something already written. I just want to keep what I wrote the first time, which does not help me improve!). Anyway, here is a 14 word summary. …Flairé is oddly pleased with it, but he wants me to let you know that the ‘cried’ doesn’t refer to tears.

Zela… “Zela! “Zela?”

“Run, Flairé!” Flairé?”

“Flairé? Flairé smiled. Flairé cried. “Flairé?

Flairé cried.

The 48 word version and the 98 word version are pretty much exactly the same, just… more.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I think my novel should now be called “Flairé Gets Called a Lot“.

Adhemlenei Book 1 is done!

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WHOOOOHOOOOO! 50,250 words, baby!
I will party after I clean the house and do piano. : D

November 17, 2009

The Farseer

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This picture can be found in the story chapter below, and is the last of the illustrations for the Pent story to date. I rather like this one; I had no reference for Pent but he came out rather well. This was the second picture I drew, so it’s a little out of order. In this picture, Ceniro is receiving a magical device designed to help him plot strategy. It’s like a GPS, sort of. I’m rather proud of the wilted flower by the waterbarrel. The stick thing that Pent has is his heal staff.

I’m listening to the Alain Litanies again… I borrowed the music from the UVic library today, so I should be able to start learning it in December after classes end! It’s exciting, but the quote at the beginning is rather sad. Of course, I can’t speak French terribly well, so I probably have it wrong. It reads: “Quand l’âme chrétienne ne trouve plus de mots nouveaux dans la détresse pour implorer la miséricorde de Dieu, elle répète sans cesse la même invocation avec une foi véhémente. La raison atteint sa limite. Seule la foi poursuit son ascension.”

In other news, the Liszt is going well, and I think I’m going to write about Mendelssohn and Folksong in my paper that’s due next Wednesday. Hooray! And I need to get working again on NNWM because I’m only 5000 words ahead now. And I have chorus testing tomorrow. Gah! There’s so much to be done at once! What am I doing here? Oh, it’s suppertime anyway. Goodbye! (runs)

Rekka no Ken: The Tactician and the Jewel: Twisted Paths

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Chapter 2: Prize or Artefact?          Chapter 4: Sly Tongues Aplenty

 

Chapter 3: Twisted Paths

Two days after they had faced Worelt and his mercenary company, Ceniro woke up in the tent he shared with Pent to find the sage sitting cross-legged on his bedroll, fiddling with tiny bits of metal and glass.

“What is that?” Ceniro asked after a moment. He had to ask three more times before Pent even looked up from what he was doing.

“This?” Pent replied at last, as if startled. “It’s a toy I’ve been working on for the past few days, actually. You always fall asleep so quickly you miss seeing it. It’s almost done, though. Just another hour or so and I can start messing with enchantments.”

“It’s a magic toy?”

Pent grinned. “If I told you what it was, you probably wouldn’t call it a toy. Be that as it may, it is indeed a magic toy. I brought the pieces with me; I hadn’t had time to finish it before we left Wrigley.”

“I see,” said Ceniro, though he didn’t. Pent reached out and patted his shoulder.

“No, you don’t, but that’s okay. You’ll see soon enough.”

 

A cloaked and hooded figure met with an armoured one in a dimly lit room in Aquleia…

“Roartz, what is the meaning of this?”

“The meaning of it, my dear Arcard, is that I want you to lay off the search for that jewel. Let the others kill each other for it and remove themselves from play.”

“But… why? They may suspect me, but they have found none of my pawns yet. This jewel will give us the power to topp-“

“Not this time, no. The monarchy is too stable; not even having the jewel’s power on our side will give us the prestige and popularity to succeed in a rebellion or even a coup. I have a meeting with the King in three hours, at which time I will inform King Mordred of Count Reglay’s quest. This will create friction between the king and his ‘beloved’ General Douglas, who is of course one of Reglay’s closest supporters, and accuse him of keeping secrets. Bide your time. Cover your tracks. The time to act may not be in the next few years, but rest assured, I am doing all I can to make it come.”

“I… understand, Lord Roartz. It will be so.”

 

Pent and Ceniro were still following that river into the mountains. Pent had slowed down and was taking more time now to speak with villagers in the little settlements they passed. He asked them about mercenaries and soldiers in the area, and then move on to talking about St. Elimine. Most often, they reacted with astonishment when he told them of St. Elimine’s Staff. In one village, one old, old man only seemed surprised by the fact that Pent knew of the staff as well, but could not tell him anything he didn’t already know. Pent would often take the ‘toy’ out of his pocket and tinker with it for a few minutes while he was waiting, saying he liked to keep his hands busy while thinking. Ceniro wondered why he hadn’t seen it before, and then realized they had been walking most of the previous days.

The next village after that, a few hours travel away, was more promising. The elders there told Pent of the amazing healing powers the staff was said to have, saying that if there was only a breath of life in a person, the jewel would restore them to full health. Old age it could do nothing for, but injuries it was near-miraculous. It could not just heal one person at a time, too, but had a wide range, like a Fortify Staff, but much greater.

Soon after noon, Pent presented the little device he had been working on to Ceniro, saying “Wave your hand over it and see what happens.”

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It was a flat silver oval, with flat surfaces of glass and some strange-looking spots and tiny dials set into the surface. Ceniro held the thing with one hand and waved at it with the other, waited, and gasped and had to sit down.

The largest flat glass surface had begun to glow with magic. A tiny white flash sprang up into the sky and faded. Seconds later, over the far-seer, a landscape appeared in glowing blue.

But what had really struck awe into the young man was the appearance of a tiny village on the landscape with two tiny (but oversized for the village) figures clearly recognizable as Pent and Ceniro. Nearby were other tiny figures showing Fiora, Priscilla, George, Caddie, Albert, and Cavven, and even some villagers.

Ceniro looked back up at Pent with his mouth hanging open. “T-thi-this…”

“I call it a farseer. Different from a telescope, you know? Oh, stop staring like that. You look like your eyes are going to fall out of your head!”

“Is it really for me?”

“Who else is going to use it? Here, let me show you how to work it.”

Pent sat down on the bench next to Ceniro and showed him what different things on the farseer could do. “Oh, I know! Try touching Cavven – yes, like that. Now say something to him!”

“Cavven?”

“Huh? Wha-? Ceniro…? Where are you?” Cavven’s tiny figure began to run back and forth, utterly confused.

Pent laughed heartily. “All right, call them all over and show them.”

Ceniro drew a circle around all the friendly figures on the map, excluding the villagers, and said: “Everyone come to the inn. Pent and I have something to show you.”

The movement of the tiny people was very fast, and it was truly astonishing to look up and see all those people he knew come in real life quickly down the street, looking worried. When they saw Pent laughing and Ceniro looking delighted, they relaxed.

The tactician jumped up. “Look at this! Pent made it. It’s a farseer, and it’s magic.”

“Is that how you scared me?” Cavven demanded in a bit of a huff, his Fibernian accent more pronounced than usual.

“Yes, and I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you. I didn’t even know it would do that.”

“In other words, blame Lord Pent,” Caddie said, giving Cavven a slap on the back.

“But see, you can see everyone, and what weapons they’re using, and if they’re hurt, and the surrounding countryside, and… if anyone’s coming…”

Pent jumped up. “What’s the matter? Is someone coming?”

“Yes, and they’re marked red, which I assume is hostile, because we’re all in blue and the villagers are in green. See, from the north, a lot of axes, lances… mages, but only one archer. And a… general-class. Well, that will be no problem. Here’s what we’ll do if they truly are hostile…”

 

An hour later, the valley floor was covered with the bodies of ex-hostile soldiers and a troop of opportunistic bandits that had attempted to raid the villages in the chaos. The approaching soldiers had been demanding that the villagers surrender Lord Pent to them in the name of Lord Blier before they even reached the village, and the count had gone out to talk to them with his little company around him. Fortunately for him, the soldiers had been spread out across the valley, allowing Pent’s forces to engage them pretty much piecemeal as soon as the closest ones attacked. Ceniro had discovered that he could talk to his fighters without the enemy being able to hear anything more than his fighters’ replies, and also that he couldn’t talk to the enemy through the farseer. But he could hear everything that his fighters could hear.

He had lost no one, and while the last few enemy soldiers were being subdued, Pent went to confront the general of the opposing army.

The general looked around with trepidation. “My invincible army! What has happened? You outnumbered those insects! You were supposed to protect me!”

“Who are you?” Pent asked, stepping up to him.

The general flinched and took half a step back. “Count Reglay! You-you have met your match here!”

Pent looked around in confusion. “You mean that army? Rather a lot just for one man? Oh, wait, I have one of the most brilliant tactical minds in the world on my side, aided, abetted, and augmented with magic…”

“Don’t puff yourself up, Reglay!”

“I’m not. He’s over there, helping my archer knock out a mountain-thief. Anyway, you still haven’t answered my question. Who are you? And why are you trying to stop me?”

The general removed his helmet. “Tremble, for I am Lord Blier! You shall never reach that jewel, for it is mine! Mine!”

Pent shook his head in disgust. “You just want it because it’s shiny. Blier, you’re an idiot.”

Blier was shaking, but now with rage. “No one calls me an idiot! You shall die for this!”

The sage smiled easily, though his eyes were like steel. “Ceniro? Is this going to plan?” He kept his eyes on Blier, sidestepping a clumsy charge. “Just checking. Thank you!”

A few minutes later, they reconvened near the village. Caddie had taken some more serious injuries, but Priscilla and Pent healed him together.

“Well, that was interesting,” Pent said when they had finished. “I never would have figured Blier one to do his own dirty work. He must have really lusted after that gem.”

“Do you think he knew what it could do, sir?” Fiora asked.

Pent snorted. “Not a chance. He wanted it because it was rumoured to be sparkly, or worth a kingdom – the usual pure greed. At least I won’t have to put up with him at court anymore now.”

“There won’t be any repercussions?” Ceniro asked anxiously. “That seems rather odd.”

“Nope,” Pent replied. “Firstly, once they even discover he’s dead, if ever, he was the aggressor and was interfering with me rather than the other way around. And if it goes to the courts, which I think it won’t, I can easily convince King Mordred that the study of the jewel is far more important than having it locked away as a bauble in some idiot’s keep. I would bet my best spellbook, too, that it would have left his possession within a month. I wonder how long he would have lived even if he had found it first.”

Ceniro shivered. Pent looked over at him and smiled. “Oh, don’t worry. Blier was a weak coward and the court knew it. I’m not and they know it too.”

“Well, I’m glad of that. Will others come?”

“Oh, they’ll come, all right, like moths to a candle. We’ll take them as they come and, Ceniro, let me worry about the political snarls. You just keep doing what you’ve been doing and I’ll let you know beforehand if you need to do it differently. Today was impressive. We defeated all the enemies, took no losses, and you made it look easy.”

Ceniro smiled and shrugged, embarrassed. “The farseer helped a lot.”

“I wish I could make battles look easy. The only reason I’m the Mage General is because I’m one of the greatest sages in Etruria and I’m younger and more active. The others are all deep in libraries in Aquleia.” Pent’s face showed just how much he would love to share that fate. “I don’t have your tactical mind, Ceniro. I know how and when to attack as myself, but others across a battlefield – that’s something else.”

“Have you ever fought in a pitched battle, Pent?”

“Ehhh, not as such, no. I was fairly good at the military academy when I did my stint there, but it was a little different. More emphasis on units and less on individuals.”

“I see.”

There was a bit of silence, awkward for Ceniro and cheerful for Pent, until George came with the pack-horse and reported that they were ready to continue travelling.

Pent nodded and pointed directly south. “Let’s aim for the village beyond that mountain, shall we?”

 

 

The little boy jumped between the girl and the youth towering over them. “Get away from her, Lorad! Stop bothering her!”

The older boy, almost a man, Lorad, with short-cropped purple hair and purple eyes, took a step towards the small boy with blonde hair and defiant grey eyes. “And what are you going to do about it? I just wanna talk to her.”

“She doesn’t want to talk to you, don’t you, Cecilia? I’ll make you leave her alone, I will! It’s my duty as General Douglas’s squire!”

“Duty,” sneered Lorad. “Is that all you’re ever on about, squirt? Sticking your nose in other people’s business, more like. I’ll teach you.”

He took a swing at the boy, who ducked and jumped on him. The green-haired girl shrank back against the wall of the castle hallway.

The scuffle was pretty quiet; neither of the boys bothered to cry out in pain or surprise, and there was just the sound of panting and grunting and scraping feet.

Then Lorad got the upper hand with his greater weight and began hitting the blonde boy in the head viciously. The girl cried out in fear, but a tall figure stepped up behind her and patted her shoulder before wading into the quarrel.

“Lorad! Percival! Stop that this instant!”

Lorad got off the smaller boy sulkily, putting on a shamed face when he saw who was chastising him. It was Rhost, the young knight under Douglas. Percival got up more slowly, glaring at Lorad. He had a split lip and an eye rapidly blackening. Lorad had not gotten off scot-free, either – he put a hand to his side and winced at the bruises he felt there.

But he curled his lip at the squire. “Well, squirt, ‘honour satisfied’ yet?”

“What is this all about?” Rhost demanded angrily, grabbing the collars of both combatants in case they decided to attack each other again.

“E-excuse me, sir…” the girl spoke up timidly, “th-they were fighting about me… I asked Lorad to stop following me, sir, and – and then Percival… jumped in to help me…”

“Has Lorad been bothering you?”

“Y-yes… he follows me everywhere…”

“The brat follows her too!” Lorad cried indignantly. Percival’s hackles rose, and it was only the hand on his collar that prevented him from diving on the other again.

Rhost took a firmer grip on both of them. “Look here, you two, you’re both old enough – especially you, Lorad – to know better than to fight in the hallways. That’s for the sparring grounds. And Lorad, I’m ashamed of you, bothering General Douglas’s charge and then brawling with a squire over it in a vastly unfair fight. You could have seriously injured him! You should remember you’re a soldier of Aquleia, and son of Lord Jonathan!”

Lorad grew sulky again and stalked off, to the final parting call from Rhost of “Don’t ever do that again!”

“Now come with me,” Rhost said to the two children. “We must tell General Douglas of this.” Percival looked away dejectedly.

Douglas looked up with interest from reading as the three entered his chambers. “Well, well, what is this? Percival with a black eye, Cecilia looking frightened out of her wits, and Rhost, you look particularly grim. What’s happened?” As he spoke, he left the chair behind his desk and moved to an armchair by the fire, gesturing for Cecilia to come close to him. When she stood beside his chair he put his hand on hers comfortingly. She looked up at him trustingly.

In quick words, Rhost told what he knew. “Lorad was following Cecilia again, and this time she asked him to leave her alone. He refused and Percival sprang to her aid, though he was getting the worst of it when I happened upon them. I scolded Lorad, but he won’t listen to me, of course.”

“I see,” Douglas said. “Is that true, Percival? What have you to say for yourself?”

Percival had been staring defiantly through his good eye. “Yes, sir, it is true. I couldn’t stand the thought of him bothering a girl I knew – and a girl under your protection, sir. He wasn’t behaving as a true knight should, or even a false knight. Not like a knight at all.”

Douglas smiled. Percival’s language was far too elaborate and proper for a ten-year-old, but it came from the training of his noble parents. “Well spoken, my boy. You did the right thing. I would have done the same in your place, though perhaps with a bit more restraint. It is not right to lose one’s temper, either.”

Percival brightened, standing straighter. “Yes sir. Thank you, sir.”

“May I heal him now, uncle?” Cecilia asked. That was her pet name for him. “I’m getting better.”

“Certainly, child,” Douglas replied. Cecilia ran to find her pupil’s staff and returned with it from her chambers quickly. She raised it over her bowed head, concentrating, and slowly the jewel that topped it began to glow blue. A blue glow slowly began to radiate from the squire, and his black eye faded and his lip mended.

Cecilia lowered her staff, a little out of breath but looking very pleased. “Do you feel better, Percy?”

The boy touched his face. “Yes, it feels much better. Thank you, Cecilia.”

“What shall I do about Lorad?” Rhost asked.

Douglas sighed. “That boy is getting to be a nuisance. I shall speak to his officer about this. I’m afraid you can do nothing at the moment. Thank you for interfering today. I wouldn’t want my best squire to be put out of action so young.”

“I should at least try to remain near Cecilia if I can,” Rhost said. “Not intrusively, but maybe I can take more breaks from reports and walk around a little.”

“That would be a good idea,” Douglas told him. “Make it happen.” He rose, giving his protégés all a pat on the shoulder. “I need to return to work; need to follow up on what the king asked me after I told him about the jewel affair this morning, need to find out what things will happen after Blier catches up with Pent. Thank you for coming to talk to me, all of you. I will see you at dinner!”

“See you at dinner, sir!” they replied, as they left, Percival at an exuberant run, Cecilia skipping behind him. Rhost was last out, striding along with a twinkle in his eye as he watched the two children. As he left the room, he glanced left and right, then smiled as if with relief and was gone down the hallway.

Douglas watched his knight, a look of uncertainty crossing his face. Then he shook it away and bent his head to his reading, smiling.

 

Lesil turned from staring haughtily out the window in a distant castle, bored, to face the darkly cloaked man. “What is it you want? I’ve already been to visit Wrigley. Louise is alone, as you said – unless you count the scholarly purple-haired shrimp who lives in the house with her.”

The cloaked man straightened a little. “Lord Lesil, I don’t have to put up with such language. What I want is merely… to give you what you desire, as a way of obtaining for myself what I desire. Surely you guessed that.”

Lesil cocked his head to one side. “What are you suggesting?”

There might have been a smile within the hood facing him. “All I ask is that you wait on your plans until I give the word. I know of your plans, and they are good ones-“

“How is it you know of my plans?”

“I know many things, my Lord Lesil, and you should go ahead with your plans – but it will be more profitable to me – and therefore, both of us – if you wait until the time is right for me.”

Lesil frowned, thinking it over. “How will I know when your right time is?”

“Aldash will tell you. Be warned – he is half in the pocket of Arcard, and is not to be fully trusted with secrets. I even have to pay out some of his underlings – that boy Lorad is a particular nuisance, though he could prove useful someday.”

Lesil continued frowning, rubbing his chin with his hand. “I’ll take the secrecy under advisement. …Thank you, Lord Eshan.”

 

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